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*****The thirththird day (at the camp) is my favorite day.Early in the morning,we went to class with sleepiness barely awake (此段用了兩次sleepiness, 可以改別的說法), everyone felt tired, but when (或者 as soon as 比較生動) the teacher came in, our sleepiness all (all 換成suddenly比較生動) disappeared.
And girls who were in our team rejoiced covertly that we sat in the first row. (看不出為什麼要暗自竊喜, 如果是因為老師很帥, 建議前一句改成 when the handsome teacher came in 文意比較清楚 ) So I focused(concentrated) on the class. And I learninged muchquite a lot. (and I learned much. 好像話沒講完, 用 I learned quite a lot 比較順)
Q-暗自竊喜 的英文如何說?
學了很多 的英文怎說呢?
******Although everyone didn’t know each other originally,but we gave care and love to each other. (可以考慮用 one another)
Q-我們給了彼此如同家人的愛和關懷 英文如何翻?
We gave love and care to one another just like a family.
It has been nine months that we don't meethaven't met. But everyone still share recent devolopements and get in touch.