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2013-10-18 8:48 am
Rewrite the following sentences so that they are phrased positively.

(1) You will not be able to apply for the HK Bank Visa Card until you are 18 years old
(2) I hope you are not unhappy with this alternative plan
(3) The report has one error, but it is a fairly small one
(4) The book is for parents like you whose children are unsuccessful in school
(5) I am too busy to see you on Friday. Is Monday inconvenient for you?

Rewrite the following sentences so that the tone is professional

(6) The calculator that you told me you were sending in December still is not here. I would appreciate an update on its'status' before March.
(7) If your cheque is not here on Monday, I shall be talking to you in the Small Claims court.
(8) If you had bothered to read my last letter, you would see that I ordered six boxes, not five.

回答 (3)

2013-10-19 1:40 am
✔ 最佳答案
1. You can apply for the HK Bank Visa card when you are 18 years old.
2. I hope you are happy with this alternative plan.
3. There is only a very minor error in the report.
4. The book is for parents like you who are trying to help their children to be successful in school.

5. I am not available on Friday. Is Monday fine for you?
6. The calculator that was send in December has not arrived yet. I would be appreciated if you can send me an update report of the calculator before March.
7. If we do not receive your cheque on Monday, we will take further actions including legal actions.
8. I have ordered six boxes instead of five with my last letter dated (put the date of the last letter).
2013-10-18 6:27 pm
Rewrite the following sentences so that they are phrased positively.

(1) You will not be able to apply the HK Bank Visa Card until 18 years of age.(2) I hope that you aren't unhappy with this alternative plan
(3) The report has got one error, but it is only a small one
(4) The book is only for parents usage but not for anyone else.
(5) I am too busy to see you on Friday. How about coming Monday?

Rewrite the following sentences so that the tone is professional

(6) The calculator that you told me to send in December still not here. I would appreciate for the delivery before March.
(7) If your cheque is not received on Monday, I shall settle this matter with you in the Small Claims court.
(8) If you had bothered to read my last letter, you would see that I ordered six boxes instead of five.
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2013-10-18 10:51 am
(6) The calculator you stated that you had sent out inDecember have not arrived in our facility. I would appreciate if you can provide me with an update of its shippingstatus by March.(7) If I do not receive your cheque by Monday, I willelevate the matter to the Small Claims Court. (8) If you perused my letter in a meticulous manner, youwould realize that I ordered six boxes instead of five.
1 to 5 seems OK to me.


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