請check 我既grammar mistakes plz

1. Hong Kong's rubbish landfill is reaching full capacity, further waste generation may lead to overflow the city into a waste yard. [看來你想講的內容比你的寫作程度更高，好好留意新聞和英文報紙的寫法，用中文構思自創句式九成都會錯。]

2. Peter has become so naughty since he met a hooligan in school. It is lead to him to be like a hooligan too.

3. This woman was good looking at first, but now she is a ugly woman because of the
accident in cosmetic surgery.

4. My son has been indulged in his virtual reality. Therefore, his academic
performance has dropped to a low ranking. [功課是否要求一定用reduce…因為所有你的寫法都用錯了]

1. Hong Kong's dumping areas had almost reached its maximumlimits which will result in the city turning into a wasteyard. 2. Peter had become so naughty since he met a hooligan in school. It led him to become one of thosemembers too. 3. Shewas good looking originally, but now she had turned into an ugly woman due to acosmetic surgery accident. 4. My son hadbeen too intoxicated/addictedin virtual reality. Consequently, his academicperformances had gone downhill ever since.

改了 grammar 與 uage

1. The landfill sites in Hong Kong are almost full, which may turn the city into a garbage yard in the long run.

2. Peter has become naughty since he met a hooligan at school. He changes into a hooligan too.

2013-10-18 02:29:03 補充：
3. This lady was good-looking before, but now she is an ugly woman after the cosmetic surgery accident.

4. My son has indulged himself in virtual reality. Therefore, his academic performance declines accordingly.

1.The dumping areas in Hong Kong are almost saturated, which may lead the city become a waste-yard.

2. Peter has become naughty since he met a hooligan in school. It makes him
change into a hooligan too.

3.This person was good-looking at first,but now (she???) becomes an ugly woman
after the accident happened in cosmetic surgery.

4.My son has been indulged in virtual reality.Therefore, his academic
results drop to a low ranking.