錯誤語法和句構可否幫忙改改!

2013-10-14 7:19 pm
老師要我用100字英文寫descriptive writing.是看圖作文,但我給不了圖你看,只可
形容:張圖只是有一個男人坐著看書,而雙手是抬著頭-

就是如此,沒其他特別,其他要自己作,我作了,但幫忙看看這
是descriptive writing?有些錯誤語法和句構可否幫忙改改!

The man is sitting in the library alone, reading a book in aquiet manner. Although he is the onlyone in the library, he pays undivided attention of reading the book. It seems the book is of tremendous importanceto him. He keeps his head down and caressing his chins. The world seems to be frozen during his reading process. The book from what I can see across his table. It is really thick and I wonder that how can he be so immersed into reading such a big volume. Every once in a while, I saw him scribbled a few notes inside the book, I think he is trying to get a full sense of what the story is about while learning his writing style simultaneously.
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2013-10-14 9:56 pm
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The man sits reading a book in the library. He is the only one in the library and pays more attention on reading. The book seems to be important to him. He holds his head in his hands. Life seems to be frozen while reading. The book is so thick that he does not know how to learn it. Once in a while, he notices that some notes inside the book and said,” I think he is trying to get a full comprehension of what the story is and learning the writing style simultaneously”.
2013-10-15 5:02 pm
A man, sitting in a library and reading a book, is deep in thought. Although he apparently is alone in the library, he still is paying undivided attention to reading his book. It appears the book is of tremendous interest to him. He keeps his head down, and keeps chin up by holding his head. The world seems to be frozen to him at this moment.From what I can gather, it is a very thick and voluminous book. I wonder how he can be so immersed in reading such a big volume. Every once a while he seems to scribble down notes. I believe he is attempting to get a full sense of the story. Simultaneously, he is also learning the author's writing style.


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