descriptive writing80 words

2013-10-08 1:22 am

形容這杯熱朱古力奶的畫面:一杯用鹿圖案的裝著熱朱古力奶,奶中有幾粒綿花糖, 旁邊放著一包包沙糖.
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Make a dominant impression
Create rich, vivid details with strong accurate language
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我作了以下開頭.之後幫幫手作埋去:
Hot chocolate milk is blended boiling milk and chocolate in a hot bottle by the street vendors. It is made from a hard brown sweet cocoa beans.

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Tin Lam

2013-10-08 2:07 am

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The sweet smell rushed into my nose, as the rose petals fall to the soft grassland. Gazing at the glamorous scene, I smiled satisfyingly. A breeze of cool wind blew my hair. This hot chocolate was sure scrumptious! The mini marshmallows popped in my mouth, melting the ice. What an incredible aroma it is...

2013-10-07 20:11:07 補充：
To make a cup of perfect hot chocolate, you have to follow the following step.
First, pour 3/4 carton of milk into the pot, the put a small tablespoon of peanut butter. Boil them until they are melted, then add some cocoa powder. Finally, add some marshmallows on it.

2013-10-07 20:12:43 補充：
Hot chocolate is not only a kind of scrumptious drink, it is also healthy as long as you drink it properly. Drinking hot chocolate can not only release your stress, it can also keep you away from losing memory because of aging. Hence, it is very beneficial to all of us.

2013-10-07 20:12:56 補充：
Hope I can help you ^^

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