proof-read for the following

2013-10-07 4:04 am
proof-read for the following

1. Last week, there was HKFEW WCBSS Student Teacher Debate Competition for two teams which were comprised of teachers and students respectively.

2.He also said that a school cannot either consist of happy teachers, or happy students.

3.It put the audience in a thrilling mood and led the debate finish in a cheer.

4.The debate end in a cheer and everybody was in a exciting frame of mind.

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2013-10-07 7:20 am
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---The proof-reading for the following:-
(1)Last week, there was (a)HKFEW-WCBSS Student Teacher Debate Competition (being conducted) for two teams which were comprised of teachers and students respectively.
(2)The (adjudicator) said that a school cannot either consist of happy teachers or happy students.
(3)It put the audience in a thrilling mood (which) led the debate (to) finish in a cheer.
(4)The debate end(ed) in a cheer and everybody was in (an) exciting frame of mind.


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