英文作文 20點

If I could take a day off, it must be the 9th of August.
This day is a meaningful day for me. When I was small, I was pathetically weak, and I get sick easily. I get sick every week that I merely feel that I have ever rested. One day, I was very sick. I vomited on the street. My mom looked at me with horror showing in her eyes, 'Mom, I feel very weird.' Before I know, I blacked out.
When I woke up, I found the world dark. I cried desperately,'where are you dad? And where are you, mom?' I couldn't see anything.
After awhile, I could see something, but still, my vision is blurred. Though so, I can see all my relatives surrounding me.
I suddenly realized that how precious my life is. I should cherish everything I possess: my loving parents, my caring relatives and my health.
That day twisted my life. My life is now, more healthier. I also, learned to treasure what I own and to love my family.

2013-09-29 18:28:57 補充：
Sorry, it should be 'got sick' , 'felt' and 'had ever rested'

2013-09-29 18:29:24 補充：
'Could see', not 'can see'

2013-09-29 18:31:00 補充：
'Knew', not 'know'

christmas係最好

因為你可以講下去玩(比較long)

or you have how many present....