10分 - 請教文法「普通對話」

2013-08-26 5:27 am
我想要兩種譯法。第一種是正確的文法,在紙信上用;另一種用作口頭上溝通
贈點方式如下,指出我的錯處,並有自己詮譯;另外當然先到先得﹙還看答案﹚。在此先感謝各位費神!!
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現在有空閒的時間嗎﹖

有少許時間空閒。什麼事情﹖

想跟你分處一下小事情,只要五分鐘就可以。

可以啊,我也正愁如何打發時間。

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1. Free time now?
2. Got a little time , for what?
3. I want to show you something , just five minute .
4. Ok,show me now , I'm thinking how to spend my time.
書面↑
口頭↓
1. Free , now?
2. Little , what?
3. Just show you some , a moment
4. Ok , go and get .

回答 (3)

2013-08-26 4:32 pm
✔ 最佳答案
書寫: I use complete sentences.

Do you have any free time now?
I have some spare time. What is the matter?
I like to discuss a small (trivial) matter with you. It only takes five minutes.
(I like to show you something. It only takes five minutes.)
It is OK. Well, I have been thinking how to kill my time.

口頭:
Got any time?
A little. What is about?
Like to talk about a small matter. Just five minutes.
(Like to show you something. Just five minutes.)
OK. Go ahead.

Your version:
口頭
1. Free, now? 回答只有 Yes, No or Yes, just ... (a few minutes .. etc)
如果第一句問, Any time now?, 可以答 little. (~ refers to time)

3. Just show you some , a moment ~ 錯
Just show you something
前面無言及某物某事, Some 指什麼?
單獨 "a moment" , 正常地解 “等片刻”

4. Ok , go and get . 不通, get what?
相信是 go and get (it), ~ it refers to something

避免誤解 "分處", 所以用 discuss 比較安全
What is "分處" ?
分處 = deal with (處理) ?
小事情 = small matter
show you something = 給你睇某物, 向你表明某事
如果 "分處" = 處理, 你的第三句英文翻譯, 完全不同中文原意

Conversational English 雖然簡單為主, 但交代要清楚, 否則聽者不明白或誤解
What’s the matter? 好過 what about? what about 好過 what?

Kill time = 打發時間, 消磨時間
trivial matter = 瑣細的事, small matter = 小的事

2013-08-26 11:27 am
1. Are you free now?
2. Got a little time ,what is the matter?
3. I want to discuss with you for just five minutes .
4. Alright, I'm just thinking how to spare my time.
書面↑
口頭↓
1. Got time?
2. Yah, what?
3. Just 5 minutes, for discussion.
4. Ok , why not.
2013-08-26 7:10 am
The written:-
(1)Any free time ?(Adding Any,no need now.)
(2)(I) got a little time ; for what ?---(subject I , semi-spoken.)
(3)Want to (show) you /Or talk about something ; just 5 minutes.---(verb show +semi-spoken)
(4)How do I spend all my time ? Okay show me now.---(This is written ; What's the clause "show me now" about ?"

The spoken:-
(1) free now ?
(2)little; what about ?
(3)Show you something ; (just) a moment.
(4) OK, go and get it / Or show me .---(This is Oral-conversation; What's the clause "go and get it" about ?)


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