請幫忙檢查我的英文求職信有冇問題

21st August, 2013




Dear Sir / Madam,



Application for the Position of Assistant Accountant (Reference No.: _____)




With reference to your advertisement in the website of JobsDB on 9th August 2013, I would like to apply for the position of assistant accountant of your company.



To begin with, I have completed relevant courses in accounting such as those specially for LCCI Level 2 and obtained a HKIAAT diploma. I have also passed all papers of the professional bridging examination held by the HKIAAT. Moreover, I would become a student member of the HKICPA soon. In addition to my good command of communication skills, I am proficient in various information systems like the Sun systems and the Vision.



Since January 2010, I have been working in ABC Limited as an accounts clerk. My scope of work there includes accounts receivable, accounts payable, general data entry and ad hoc jobs assigned by the supervisor. These work experiences help me to deal with different situations at work more confidently.



The main reason for me to apply for this position of assistant accountant of your company is that I want to broaden my horizon, especially in the field of accounting. I believe that the combination of my skills and experiences will be a valuable asset to your company.



Enclosed please find my resume for your perusal. I will be grateful if I am granted an opportunity of interview, in which I can explain why I am the suitable person for this position of assistant accountant thoroughly.



Thank you so much for your kind attention. I am looking forward to hearing from you.



Yours faithfully,



Abby Hwang



Enclosure: Resume
希望幫到你。

2013-08-21 02:52:17 補充：
其實現在我也在準備 grad job 的 partner interview，雖然下年才畢業......

大家一起加油吧！

相信明天會有高手答你, 我只在此說少許個人意見 ^o^

(1)
The main reason of my application to your company is that I want to broaden my horizon in the accounting field.

(2)
I shall be grateful if I can be granted an interview.

(3)
可以delete "early"這個字, 那感覺上沒有催促人的感覺。

祝 好運!!