請英文能力很好的人幫幫我！

是不是漏了一個字？

你永遠是最閃亮的星星 會永遠記住你！

我覺得是這樣的:

你永遠是最閃亮的星星,我會永遠記住你！

1.)You're the brightest star forever and I will remembering you to the end.
2.)You're the brightest star and I will remember you forever

1= 自己嘗試翻譯了一下，不知道對不對
2=我翻譯了之後問外國人的，他說不需要兩個forever

You will always be the brightest stars will always remember you!

版大您好！

以下的翻譯是我自己翻譯的，絕對不是翻譯軟體！
翻譯網站的很少有機率是對的～因此最好是自己翻。

參考看看吧！若有疑問，歡迎來詢問我噢！＾＾

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你永遠是最閃亮的星星 會永遠記住你！
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You are the most shiny star forever, I will remember you forever!

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至於網路翻譯的，幫您修改一下噢，因為文法錯了！
翻譯可以有很多種，但是文法一定要正確！

1 You are the star which glistens the most forever , I will remember you forever.

2 You will always be the most shiny star, I will always remember you.
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BY:TER~~~XDD

2013-08-21 15:55:45 補充：
順帶一提：
Shining star 也可以改成 Brightest star
兩者的意思皆相同噢！

To史提芬:
miss是"想念"的意思!
記住應翻remember!:)

最閃亮的星星 = brightest star

you are always the most shining star,and i will miss you forever and ever!