英文文章修改問題(港)

＃ 盡量保持原文，只改文法和不通之處。

The writer took almost 40 years to write out this absolutely brilliant plot. It is so incredible!


The leading man’s life is really ever-changing.
He was caught and thrown in jail just for that he stole a loaf of bread.
In the jail, he learned how to hate the world and the people around him.
There was no God in his heart, but Satan.


After he got his freedom, he was discriminated by everyone.
One day, he met a priest. Since then, everything had changed.
After working hard, he was elected the mayor finally.


The story told us one thing: Starting with a clean slate is never too late.
As far as you can see, the world is fabulous, filled with happiness, laughter and bliss. These are so precious!

2013-08-20 15:29:46 補充：
因為你是在複述故事的內容，通常這樣就會用 reported speech，例如原本 present perfect tense （has changed）的會寫成 past perfect tense （had changed）

2013-08-20 17:13:17 補充：
可以。

這句不是在複述故事的內容，只是你的感想，所以不用 reported speech