大大幫忙轉英文(說話用)

When you've gone through the room changing procedures, please remember that you must return the temporary room card to us before leaving the residential hall.
當你做好轉房手續後，必須於離開宿舍前將臨時咭交還給我們。

We've already added a function that enables you to go in and out of the facility room to the temporary room card for you.
我們己幫你在臨時咭上附加了設施房的出入功能。

You're not allowed to have any drinks containing alcohol within the school area. Please drink outside the school if you need to.
在學院範圍內不可以飲用含有酒精的飲品，如果有需要的話，請於學院外飲用。


希望幫到你。

2013-08-14 13:50:48 補充：
第二句，如果要順口一點的話：
For you, we've already added the function to your temporary room card that will enable you to go in and out of the facility room.

When you do turn room procedures, must leave the dormitory before the temporary card will be returned to us.


We have to help you on the card attached in a temporary housing facility access functions.


Not within the scope of the college drinking alcoholic beverages, if necessary, please academy outside drinking.


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