英文作文(20點!!!)

1.
August 9 this summer is surely one of my most unforgettable days during the summer holiday, and probably in my life.

I have always been a big fan of X and that day, I went to a shopping mall to join an event X would attend. Arriving the venue an hour before the event started, I thought I could get the frontmost seat there which would allow me to be closest to X. Yet, to my surprise, by the time I arrived, there were already lots of fans and I could only sit at the back. When the event started, X came in and all his fans, including me, screamed excitedly. Something great then happened: XXX invited the person sitting at seat 21 - which was me - to sing with him on the stage. I happily went on the stage and X gave me a big hug. He then held my hand and we sang my favourite song together. Looking at X's perfect face, listening to his sexy voice and having such a once-in-a-lifetime opportunity to interact so closely with him, I felt like I had no regrets in my life anymore! This day would stay in my memory forever, as if a drop of ink that permanently stains a white cloth.

2.
Recently, I have visited the small playground near my old home. The small playground did not change much and everything there was familiar to me. Surrounded by some pine trees were the swings. Except that they had become more rusty, there were the same as before. A blue slide too big for me to play was next to the swings. A roundabout was behind it. I stepped onto the roundabout and made it turning with my foot, as if I was rowing a boat. My view became a bit blurred while the roundabout was turning. I have not had this kind of feeling for years and felt nice to experience it again. After a few minutes, I realized a young boy was there waiting to play the roundabout. So I got off and left the playground. As I left, I began to imagine whether he would be as nostalgic for the playground as me. I secretly made a wish that things there would not change much, so that I could still feel the same years after.

2013-08-12 14:18:48 補充：
X 是明星的名字，你作一個吧。

2013-08-12 17:12:07 補充：
更正：第一篇 such ''an'' once(...)

2013-08-12 17:15:29 補充：
對唔住呀，我 proofread 得唔仔細：
更正：第一篇 as if it is a drop of ink that permanently stains a white cloth.