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Sometimes, cartoon characters are even hugged by tourists, especially children chatting with them.

註：
1. 被動式，需要加 are。（我不知道你前文的 tense 是什麼，但你是要跟返前文的 tense 的，假如前面用開 past tense，那麼這裡是用 were 而不是 are。）

2. especially 通常不會獨立成句的。

3. for 在這裡會讓人誤以為 children 是指 cartoon characters 而非 tourists。

4. 最尾不用 comma（有點多餘），直接將「chatting with them」這個 participle 來接著 children 吧。


希望幫到你。

"Sometimes, cartoon characters were even hugged by tourists, especially children, like to chat with them." needs rewriting the last phrase to correct its grammar.

2013-08-12 17:59:57 補充：
"Sometimes, cartoon characters are even hugged by tourists, especially children who like chatting with them." is a better sentence.

Sometimes, cartoon characters are even hugged by tourists especially children, who like chatting with them.