I'd like to conjure
Salix babylonica
to help shed my tears
Afternoon Haiku For You/ C/C?
2013-07-25 7:43 pm
回答 (11)
2013-07-26 1:18 am
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Enjoyed it!---G-----can we get your willow to weep beer? Liked the word conjour.---------------william
2013-07-25 8:27 pm
Gems
Prize Haiku you woman of the world. Hey, can I borrow
your avatar the next time I do a Haiku? I swear !
You have set up the juxtaposition on Lines one and three,
and your kireji, your cutting word which helps bring the
juxtapose together, is definitely on line two.
Bravo missy
Prize Haiku you woman of the world. Hey, can I borrow
your avatar the next time I do a Haiku? I swear !
You have set up the juxtaposition on Lines one and three,
and your kireji, your cutting word which helps bring the
juxtapose together, is definitely on line two.
Bravo missy
2013-07-25 10:18 pm
Which of us likes high-cooze better is an open question.
Hidey hole for tears
Salix Babylonica's
pendulous branches.
Hidey hole for tears
Salix Babylonica's
pendulous branches.
參考: Trite, yes I can be trite.
2013-07-25 9:46 pm
I'd like to conjure
A huge prehistoric sloth
The world will be ours!
A huge prehistoric sloth
The world will be ours!
2013-07-25 8:25 pm
wow! Very witty, visually pleasing and a great use of language!
2013-07-25 8:05 pm
Ah the weeping willow, Gem. How lovely and so visual.
2013-07-25 7:58 pm
Knew It!
Your work is so witty and sometimes - equally- edgy
that I think an `Approach With Awareness` ought precede each posting.
This haiku is not an exception.
9 (Ouch!).
I will desist from a comment *peers peripherally over shoulder* but that
it touches a part of one which other (- - - - - - - ) can never even envision as existent! :)
*frowns* I didn`t know it`s a tree!
I see NOW, how this sheds - Beauty..compliments.
9.5 minus (Ouch!) .
Your work is so witty and sometimes - equally- edgy
that I think an `Approach With Awareness` ought precede each posting.
This haiku is not an exception.
9 (Ouch!).
I will desist from a comment *peers peripherally over shoulder* but that
it touches a part of one which other (- - - - - - - ) can never even envision as existent! :)
*frowns* I didn`t know it`s a tree!
I see NOW, how this sheds - Beauty..compliments.
9.5 minus (Ouch!) .
2013-07-26 3:34 am
A friend is needed
A caress with soft lamb's ear
On a burning cheek
A caress with soft lamb's ear
On a burning cheek
參考: sorry---terrible attempt to partner with your magnificent haiku.
2013-07-25 10:03 pm
Willow,, dear, is sound asleep.
You need some smelling salts to weep,
or chop an onion into chunks.
White willow bark helps hungover drunks.
Or a nip of the hair of the cur
You need some smelling salts to weep,
or chop an onion into chunks.
White willow bark helps hungover drunks.
Or a nip of the hair of the cur
2013-07-25 10:14 pm
A delicious delivery.
2013-07-26 10:49 am
Just lovely...
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