有關過去式的問題

没用錯，因為你用意是描述昨天的所見所聞。

另外，應是the Bun Plaza，Bun Plaza 是專有名詞，應有the

還有，是stationery shop's', jewellery shop's', 和different kinds of shoe's'

Staff 職員是 uncountable 的，不能用a staff，可改成 a staff member 或 the staff

希望幫到你。


2013-07-19 12:43:25 補充：
I arrived at the plaza at 330 pm 是沒錯的，只是讀起來很累贅。

2013-07-19 15:50:52 補充：
係呀。

2013-07-19 15:53:13 補充：
注意，如果staff是countable的話，意思就會變成權柭而非職員。

This artice's tenses ha used corrctly.

But, 'Bun Plaza' should add 'the', so it's 'the Bun Plaza'

2013-07-19 13:35:04 補充：
Sorry, I wrote a wrong words!

It should be 'had', not 'ha'.

2013-07-19 14:12:19 補充：
It should be 'The plaza's wall is in brown colour.'

2013-07-19 14:13:58 補充：
Also, 'stationery shop' should be 'stationery shops' and 'jewellery shop' should be 'jewellery shops'.

2013-07-19 14:15:08 補充：
'I arrived at the plaza when the time is 3:30pm.' is better.

2013-07-19 14:16:09 補充：
'Staff ' is a uncountable nuns so it canlt add 's'.

You can write 'a staff member' or 'the staff'.

2013-07-19 14:17:14 補充：
Sorry, I write a wrong words again!

It should be 'uncountable nouns', not 'uncountable nuns'.

2013-07-19 14:18:12 補充：
'I arrived there at 3:30pm.' is better than 'I arrived at the plaza when the time is 3:30pm.' !

2013-07-19 14:19:10 補充：
Can you choose me is the best answer?

2013-07-19 14:19:58 補充：
Sorry, a lot of wrong words!

I arrived there at 3:30p.m. 對

I arrived at the plaza at 3:30pm 錯