可以這樣寫:
"Thank you and Mary for being so hospitable to my eldest brother, treating him to lunch in XXX."
(款待食lunch英文是treating to lunch。)
( so hospitable是那麼好客。)
(大哥是eldest brother。)
(XXX是那個外國的名稱。)
2013-07-18 18:02:52 補充:
如果盡量跟你寫的"Thank you for your hospitality for you and Mary ....",可以改寫為:
"Thank you and Mary for your hospitality to my eldest brother, treating him to lunch when he was in XXX."
The Interpretation:-----
Thank you so much for (your) hospitality of (you and Mary) for having lunch with my (Steve's elder) brother (last weekend.)
---Hence:-Thank you so much for your hospitality of you and Mary for having lunch with my elder brother.