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Dear Sir / Madam,
Application for the position of XXX
Recently, from the website of the Interactive Employment Service of the Labour Department, I am delighted to find this position of XXX of your company is open for application, which I am interested in and would like to apply for.
After I graduated from secondary school in XXXX, I entered XXX in XXXX and worked as a/an XXX, who was responsible for the management of uniforms and costumes of the park. But as I had always been looking forward to a job of serving guests, in which I would have many chances to communicate with the others, I joined XXX in XXXX as a/an XXX, whose job was to serve the guests. I had served in banquets of various scales and gone on a business trip to Guangzhou while I was working there. Later, in XXXX, I became the XXX of the famous theatre in the park through internal transfer, where XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX. I have always been cautious and detail-minded while working, good at communicating with people, and able to handle both large and small projects independently.
I am highly interested in working at your company. Although my work experiences may not match the requirements of your company, I would face any new challenges with a positive attitude and I really hope to develop my career in this industry. If I have the opportunity to work for your company, I will surely fully commit myself to it.
Please kindly find the my resume attached for reference. I would be very grateful if you would grant me a chance of interview.
Thank you for your time and attention. Please feel free contact me if there are any problems. I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,XXXX
Enclosure: Resume
希望幫到你。
2013-07-15 18:26:59 補充:
尾二段:Please kindly find my resume attached for your reference (沒 the, 加 your)
尾段:Please feel free to contact me if there are any problems. (加 to)
2013-07-15 18:31:17 補充:
另外,於XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX 是指甚麼?在此我把它譯成「於這裏做XXXXXX的事(職責)」
2013-07-15 18:32:18 補充:
還有,這是電郵嗎?是的話,那就不用寫日期了。
2013-07-15 18:34:47 補充:
如果你知道收信人的姓,那開頭就改成 Dear Mr/Ms X,後面亦改成 Yours sincerely。