I'll deliver to her when I rec

I'll deliver it to her when I receive it.
動詞要有受詞，而且副詞子句的動詞不能用過去式，因為還未收到，動詞要用現在簡單式。

2013-07-12 17:47:11 補充：
本句的副詞子句也可以用現在完成式：when I have received it

2013-07-13 10:01:33 補充：
I'll deliver it to her on receiving it.
保持同方向，不宜由主動接被動。

2013-07-13 11:46:07 補充：
I'll deliver the book to her on receiving it.較合適,代名詞放在其代表的名詞後面才清楚.

2013-07-13 12:58:28 補充：
不可
只有to deliver something to somebody
或to deliver something to something: Would you like to have the latest fashions delivered to your door?
或to deliver somebody from something = to free someone from an upleasant situation

2013-07-13 13:17:37 補充：
to deliver +間接受詞+直接受詞
美國口語=為(候選人)拉票,為(某種運動)呼籲(支持)
Let's deliver him all our support.
= Let's deliver all our support to him.
所以在當授予動詞用時,deliver的意思不是把(東西)遞送給(某人)
see遠東新世紀英漢辭典p.368deliver A5解釋

003是可以的.但I'll deliver it to her when it arrives比較好.

不可以。

在這句中，“deliever”是及物動詞； 所以要說Deliver "it" to her才對。

可改為 I'll deliver to her when it is received. 這樣可以嗎?

2013-07-13 01:41:23 補充：
那改為 I'll deliver it to her when it is received. 這樣可以嗎?

2013-07-13 10:20:45 補充：
謝謝各位指教! 再請教

I'll deliver the book to her on receiving it.

還是 I'll deliver it to her on receiving the book.

哪一個較正確?

2013-07-13 12:50:18 補充：
謝謝! 再請教

I'll deliver the book to her on receiving it.

改為

I'll deliver her the book on receiving it.

合適嗎?

有人要寄東西給我代轉給某女士
1) Will follow your instruction upon which is receipted ;
2) Will re-forward on your behalf upon receipt ;

present perfect consists of part of the verb have with the past participle of the main verb,receive, used to express actions completed by the present , a particular point in the future.:-I have received;
Hence I'll deliver to her when I have received.