I visited New Government Headquarters in Admiratly yesterday. I arrived at the
Headquarters at 9:30am. I presented a permit to visit the headquarters. There
were many offices.
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2013-07-03 3:28 pm
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2013-07-03 7:20 pm
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Reduction of adverbial clauses:-Adverbial clauses may be reduced by changing them into:-
participial phrase;Or absolute phrase;
eg:-I visited New Government Headquarters in Admiralty yesterday.
After arriving (reaching)at the Headquarters at 9:30am., I presented a permit.---(participial phrase containing a gerund.)
A permit being presented, the visit began.----(Absolute phrase.)
There were many offices.(The past tense.)
2013-07-13 2:52 pm
I paid a permitted visit to the many offices of new Government Headquarters in Admiralty from 9:30am yesterday.
2013-07-08 10:17 pm
I visited the New Government Headquarters in Admiratly yesterday. I arrived at there at 9:30am. I presented a permit to visit there. There were many offices.
2013-07-12 13:43:23 補充：
I arrived there at 9:30am.
2013-07-12 13:43:23 補充：
I arrived there at 9:30am.
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2013-07-04 9:03 pm
I visited the new Government Headquarters yesterday. Upon arriving the headquarters in Admiralty around 9:30am, I showed my identity before entering the building.
The building is majestic. It overlooks the Victoria Harbour, and houses the offices of various government departments.
The building is majestic. It overlooks the Victoria Harbour, and houses the offices of various government departments.
2013-07-03 7:27 pm
以下只是建議的修改寫法
I visited the New Government Headquarters in Admiralty yesterday. I arrived at the Headquarters at 9:30am and presented a permit to enter the building. There were many offices.
註：當你不斷重複"I"或某一個主詞時便可考慮把兩句連接...因為它們應該有關係。當然還有很多可能的寫法，例如：When I arrived at the HQ at 9:30am, I presented a permt to enter.
I visited the New Government Headquarters in Admiralty yesterday. I arrived at the Headquarters at 9:30am and presented a permit to enter the building. There were many offices.
註：當你不斷重複"I"或某一個主詞時便可考慮把兩句連接...因為它們應該有關係。當然還有很多可能的寫法，例如：When I arrived at the HQ at 9:30am, I presented a permt to enter.
2013-07-03 4:45 pm
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