When my husband was cooking in the kitchen, I hurt my finger when I was sewing.
這句子有兩個when，它的表達方式是否很模糊？如果不是，它的中譯是甚麼？
這句子的表達方式是否很模糊？
2013-07-01 8:44 pm
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2013-07-01 9:25 pm
✔ 最佳答案
從讀者角度看，我不覺得意思很模糊，但因為前後都有 when，所以覺得有些不通順罷了。其次，我覺得你可用 while 來代替 when，因為 while 是指一個過程，而是 when 指於某一點時間所發生的事情，cooking 和 sewing 都是一個過程（這些事一般不會在一刻就能完成），所以用 while 會好一些。
要改的話，我會改成這樣：
While my husband was cooking in the kitchen, I was sewing and hurt my finger. （當我的丈夫在廚房煮食的時候，我正在縫紉並弄傷了手指。）
希望幫到你。
2013-07-01 13:27:45 補充：
當然你可像 no3lunch 大大說般簡單地不要第一句，但這就可能少了你想表達的意思，所以要衡量一下。
參考: 自己
2013-07-02 6:20 am
When my husband was cooking in the kitchen, I hurt my finger when I was sewing. - people understand what you mean but it will be better if we rewirte it as following
When my husband was cooking in the kitchen, I hurt my finger during sewing
When my husband was cooking in the kitchen, I hurt my finger during sewing
2013-07-02 3:30 am
When my husband was cooking in the kitchen, I hurt my finger sewing.
2013-07-01 9:33 pm
Such Unsure Bi Saying ?
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Su chun su re bi sa ying =
2013-07-01 13:38:04 補充：
English Unsure Bi Saying 26
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Eng li shun su re bi sa ying =
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Su chun su re bi sa ying =
2013-07-01 13:38:04 補充：
English Unsure Bi Saying 26
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Eng li shun su re bi sa ying =
參考: Bi Saying Putonghua 23, Answer English Identity Our Usage ?
2013-07-01 9:08 pm
第一句可以不要!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
2013-07-01 9:07 pm
When my husband was cooking in the kitchen, I hurt my finger when I was sewing.
當我在縫紉時弄傷了手指，我老公正在廚房煮食。
當我在縫紉時弄傷了手指，我老公正在廚房煮食。
參考: me
2013-07-01 9:04 pm
中文可翻譯為這樣會通順些:
當我在縫紉時弄傷了手指,我老公正在廚房煮食。
當我在縫紉時弄傷了手指,我老公正在廚房煮食。
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