請幫忙檢查英文求職信的英文文法

Dear Sir or Madam,
Application for the position of Senior Accounts Clerk .
With reference to your advertisement in the website of JobsDB of 31st May 2013, I wish to apply for the position of Senior Accounts Clerk in your company.
I have already completed relevant courses in accountancy such as LCC&I level 2 and HKIAAT diploma. I also have good communication skills in Cantonese and English and good telephone manner.
I am employed as an accounts clerk with XXX Limited in May 2010. My job duties there include genearl accounting tasks such as AR, AP, filing, data entry etc. Now, I am still working with this company.
The reason why I want to leave my present and work for your company is I want to widen my work knowledge. I feel my skills and experience would be great assets for your company in this position.
I enclose my resume and a copy of my qualification documents for your reference. I shall be grateful I will be invited to attend an interview at any time convenient to you. Then, I would like to explain more about my experience, qualifications and abilities.
Thank you for your time and consideration.
Sincerely,
Candy Wong
Enclosure:
My resume

ABCCompany1188Glouester Road, Rm 112CausewayBay, Hong Kong ChanTai Man252Sha Tsui Road, TsuenWan June21st, 2013 DearSir/Madam:

With reference toyour advertisement in the JobsDB website posted on 31st May 2013, I would like to apply for the position of Senior Accounts Clerkin your company.

I have completedrelevant courses in Accounting such asLCC&I Level 2, and obtained a HKIAAT diploma. I also have a good command of communication skills, and I am proficient in bothCantonese as well as English.

I had been working in XXXLimited as an Accounts Clerk since May 2010. My job duties include accounts receivable, accounts payable, generaldata entry and filing. (Do not abbreviateyour job duties, need to be spelled out completely).
The mainreason of my application with your company is I want to broaden my horizon inthe Accounting field. I strongly believethat the combination of my skills and experiences will become an asset to yourcompany.

Enclosedplease find my resume for your perusal. Ishall be grateful if I can be granted for an interview, so I can explain myqualifications more thoroughly. Shouldyou have any further questions, please feel free to contact me at XXXX-XXXX oremail me at [email protected] looking forward to your early reply. YoursTruly,CandyWong Encl:Resume (You don’t need to use “My”in front of the word resume).

2013-06-23 01:05:14 補充：
There are a few things to pay attention to when writing a cover letter:
1. Since it's a formal letter, do not use any abbreviations.
2. You must write the company information at the beginning, then your own address information.
3. Don't forget to address the person you are sending the letter to.

2013-06-23 01:05:38 補充：
3. For example, Dear HR Manager, or generally say Dear Sir/Madam,

on the website
good telephone manner --> my telephone manner is good.
an accounts clerk --> an account clerk
in May 2010 --> starting from May 2010 and I am still working with this company (move up working ... company after May 2010)
widen my work knowledge --> to widen my horizon

2013-06-22 18:18:51 補充：
I feel my skills and experience would be great assets for your company in this position.

（ttoo proud of yourself ??? ）

2013-06-22 18:21:27 補充：
I shall be grateful I will be invited to attend an interview ...
--> I shall be grateful if I will be granted an interview at any time that is convinent to you so that I could explain .....

2013-06-22 18:24:41 補充：
Enclosure:
resume, certificates and reference letters

(If there is only one reference letter, state reference letter. If there is no reference letter, it will become resume and certificates)

Dear Sir or Madam,


Application for the position of Senior Accounts Clerk [Reference number，如有]


With reference to your advertisement in the website of JobsDB [on] 31st May 2013, I wish to apply for the position of Senior Accounts Clerk in your company.


I have already completed [the] relevant courses in accountancy such as [the LCCI] level 2 and [the] HKIAAT diploma. I also [possess] good communication skills in Cantonese and English[,] and [have always demonstrated] good telephone [etiquette while handling calls].


I [was] employed as an accounts clerk [by] XXX Limited in May 2010. My job duties there include [general] accounting tasks [like] AR, AP, filing, data entry[,] etc. Now, I am still working [for] this company.


The reason why I want to leave [the company I am working at] and work for your company is [that] I want to [enrich] my knowledge [in the accountancy profession]. I [believe that] my skills and experience would be great assets to your company in this position.


I [have enclosed] my resume and a copy of my qualification documents for your reference. I shall be [very] grateful [should I] be [granted the opportunity of] an interview [by you] at [anytime] convenient to you[, in which] I would like to explain more about my experience, qualifications and abilities.


Thank you for your time and consideration.


[Yours faithfully],


Candy Wong


Enclosure:
My resume


希望幫到你。

2013-06-22 10:56:12 補充：
我畢業後也應該會投身會計界......