幫我翻譯成英文,thank you letter

Dear Ms. Ada, (Make sure that you address the person with Ms. Or Mr., also the name should be capitalized for the first letter) Thank you for taking the time to interview me on November 6th. I would like to take this opportunity to reiterate my interest for applying the position of Beauty Advisor. I sincerely wish that I will be hired by your company. I strongly believe that I will become an asset to your company. I am looking forward to working with you. Thank you.
Sincerely,XXX

Dear Ms. Ada,

I would like to thanks for taking your time to did the second round
interview with me today (6 Nov).

I'm very interested in the post of beauty advisor,
and I wish to join you company with sincerity.

I'm desirous to have more opportunities to understand your company,
and hope that I can get a chance to working in your company.

Looking forward to hear from you soon!

Yours faithfully,
XXX

呢封似乎唔係thank you letter，似求職信多d囉！

Dear Ada,

Want to thank you today (November 6) taking the second interview with me.

I am very interested (Beauty Advisor) this position.

I am very serious about joining your company, and I look forward to many more opportunities to understand your company.

I hope you can give a chance to work both.

Looking forward to your reply.

Sincerely,
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