[英文] (20 pts)

2013-06-09 3:46 am
Are there any mistakes in terms of grammar, use of vocabulary at the following paragraph?
Please correct those mistakes, thanks!


  I have sufficient amount of funds in my bank account to afford my two-year tuition fee and living costs during my stay in Canada, as well as the return ticket. As for the costs of room and board, I have an uncle who lives in Vancouver, he is definitely willing and able to provide me with his house and free meals and it will not influence his future life since he has enough saving, decent jobs and stable incomes.

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2013-06-10 5:22 pm
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I have sufficientamount of funds in my bank account to afford my two-year tuition fees, and the round tripairline tickets during my stayin Canada. As for the costs of room andboard, I have an uncle who lives in Vancouver who will be my sponsor. He is financially secure enough to provide mewith all of my basic living needs.
2013-06-09 8:20 am
I have sufficient SAVING to afford my two-year tuition fees, return ticket as well as all DAILY EXPENSES during my stay in Canada. In terms of BOARDING, I have an uncle who lives in Vancouver and promises that he will provide me a room to live in as well as meals. And he said it will not influence his future life as he has enough money, a decent job and stable income.
參考: myself
2013-06-09 7:24 am
Are there any mistakes in terms of grammar, use of vocabulary at the following paragraph?
Please correct those mistakes, thanks!


  I have had sufficient funds in my bank account to afford my two-year's tuition fees and sundries costs during my studies in Canada. As for board and lodging, I have an uncle who lives in Vancouver, he is willing to provide me with such requirements but it will not affect his income for he is wealthy and doing jobs.
參考: Partly according to The advanced learner's dictionary of current English with Chinese translation published by Hong Kong Oxford Univerisity Press 1975
2013-06-09 5:50 am
I have sufficient amount of funds in my bank account to afford my two-year tuition fee, living costs during my stay in Canada, AND the return ticket. As for the costs of BOARDING, I have an uncle who lives in Vancouver; he is definitely willing and able to provide me with ACCOMODATION and meals. IT will not affect his future life since he has enough saving, A DECENT JOB and a stable INCOME.

Changes are capitalised:)

2013-06-08 21:51:29 補充:
TCW's answer changed your 'two-year tuition fee' into 'two-yearS tuition fee', which is incorrect. When a '-' is used you needn't add the s.

2013-06-08 21:53:26 補充:
Also, 'since he has enough saving' should be changed to 'since he has enough savingS'.
參考: myself
2013-06-09 4:42 am
I have sufficient amount of funds in my bank account to afford my two-years
tuition fee and living costs during my staying in Canada. As well as return
ticket. For the costs of room and board, I have an uncle who lives in Vancouver.
He is definitely willing to provide me with his house and free meals. It will not
influence his future life since he had enough saving, decent jobs and stable
incomes.


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