改正英文文法

2013-06-06 11:06 am
1.D.B.Cooper board Flight305 for Seattle on 24th November 1971,he has a bomb in the briefcase and demand $20000 and four parachutes, he also require the pilot to head south from Seattle and let him go. When he leave the airplane, the Fighter Planes go to chase his whereabouts, but they can't find his trace and the FBI also can't find something after 9 years ago.D.B.Cooper enter the history book as an authentic American legend and inspire the book, film, to publish ,also set up a D.B.Cooper Day's festival.

2.Everyon want to be value and working can give us a sense of striation and purpose that we find different to impose on ourselves and increase the communicate with others in society, but if we have job addicts, it will make us irritable and lethargic and the newly-retired man will lose their appetite for life after they don't work. Also have a different job's time and demand in different period and the workplace become redundant, most people will work in house and use the email or phone to keep their communication and the writer also write this passage in the house.

3.Arthur is a writer and Dr Bell is to inspire his creation Sherlock Holmes, he meet Dr Bell in 1877 at the university and he is one of his professors. Later, he select him to serve as his assistant and he is able to witness Dr Bell's remarkable ability to quickly deduce a great deal about the patient ,also Dr Bell observe the way a person move ,For example: he can look the sailor tattoos to assist him to knowing where their travels. Arthur publish the first Holmes story in 1887 , the reader don't believer he isn't a real person and they write the letter to Sherlock Holmes, begging him to solve the problem.
更新1:

這些都是課文的總結,到時候是要說出來的,所以只要改正文法就可以了(用parsent tense)

更新2:

這些都是課文的總結,到時候是要說出來的,所以只要改正文法就可以了(用parsent tense)

更新3:

present tense

回答 (2)

2013-06-07 1:02 am
✔ 最佳答案
you're described very in detail, but what is the point?

2013-06-07 09:40:57 補充:
Described ver well, not necessarily to correct!

2013-06-07 21:44:01 補充:
Okay, in that in 1887 should use that " was published "....., etc. And present tense is used in this moment or time, alright?

2013-06-07 23:06:22 補充:
he met Dr. Bell in 1877.
參考: me, me, me, me
2013-06-06 2:17 pm
If you don't provide the Chinese, it's really hard to correct your mistakes.


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