小篇英文文法更正與翻譯

我的夢想是當一位公務員，
My dream is to become an official.

當我老的時候，我可以不用工作使用我的退休金生活，
When I get old, I will be able to receive retirements pensions without having to work.

為什麼我想當公務員呢？
Why I want to be a official？

原因一是：
The first reason:

公務員不用擔心會失去工作，
Officials do not have to worry about losing their jobs.

工作與薪水都穩定，不用加班，
Work and salary are both stable, without the need of working extra hours.

還有很多福利政策。
there is also welfares for the workers.

另外一個原因是：
Another reason is ：

公務員退休後可領到一筆退休金，
After officials retire, they can earn retirement pensions.

可以拿著退休金到處旅行；
and can travel anywhere with this money.

可以拿著退休金過悠閒的生活。
They can live luxurious lives with the pesions they received after they retire.

Publc servant 有點像是公眾的僕人

希望有幫到你 ^^

的夢想是當一位公務員，

My dream is to be a public servant.

當我老的時候，我可以不用工作使用我的退休金生活，

When I become old , I can live on my pensions without going to work .

為什麼我想當公務員呢？

Why do I want to be a public servant？

原因一是：

One reason is ：

公務員不用擔心會失去工作，

Public servants don't worry about losing their jobs,

工作與薪水都穩定，不用加班，

Because their work and salaries are stable and they don't overwork.

還有很多福利政策。

Plus, they still have a lot of benefits.

另外一個原因是：

Another reason is ：

公務員退休後可領到一筆退休金，

After retirement, they can get pensions.

可以拿著退休金到處旅行；可以拿著退休金過悠閒的生活。

They can go travel around the world with their pensions and live an idle life.

我的夢想是當一位公務員，

My dream is be a public servant.

當我老的時候，我可以不用工作使用我的退休金生活，

When I become old , I can spend my retirement pay without working.

為什麼我想當公務員呢？

Why do I want to be a public servant？

原因一是：

The reason is ：

公務員不用擔心會失去工作，

Public servant don't worry about losing their jobs,

工作與薪水都穩定，不用加班，

Their work and salary are both very stable.

還有很多福利政策。

I addithion, they enjoy a lot of fringe benefits.

另外一個原因是：

Another reason is ：

公務員退休後可領到一筆退休金，

They can receive a great amount of pension.

可以拿著退休金到處旅行；


They can afford travelling abroad with their pension.



可以拿著退休金過悠閒的生活。

The can also enjoy a comfortable living depending on their pension.