Thank you letter 可以幫我翻譯成英文嗎?

Dear Miss Chan[,]

I would like to thank you for giving me [an] opportunity for the interview on 31/5/2013.

I am very interested [in] this position (Beauty Advisor). It is my sincerest hope to become a member of your company and I am always seeking for more opportunities to learn about it. Therefore, I am hoping for the opportunity of a second interview from you. I would be very grateful if you could grant me such an amazing opportunity.


Thank you so much for your kind attention. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.


[Yours] sincerely,
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Dear Miss Chan

I would like to thank you for giving me the opportunity for the interview on 31/5/2013.

I am very interested (Beauty Advisor) this position.

I am very serious about joining your company, and I look forward to many more opportunities to understand your company.

I hope you can give a second in both the opportunities

Looking forward to your reply

Sincerely,
__________

Dear Miss Chan, Thank you for giving me the opportunity of interviewing with you on May 31st, 2013. I would like to reiterate my interest in this potential position. With my knowledge and experiences in this field, I truly believe I will become an asset to your company. I will be looking forward to working with you. Thank you. Yours Sincerely,XXX

Dear Miss Chan ,

I would like to thank you for giving me the opportunity for the interview
on 31/5/2013.

I am very interested (Beauty Advisor) this position .


I am very sincerely in joining your company and I am looking forward to have
the opportunity to learn more and know more in your company.

I hope that you can give me a second in chance.

Looking forward to your reply

Sincerely,
__________

Dear Miss Chan,
I would like to thank you for giving me the opportunity for the interview on 31/5/2013.
I am very interested in the Beauty Advisor position.
I have sincerity in joining your company.
I look forward to the opportunities to learn more about your company.
Hope that you can give a second in opportunity for me.
Looking forward to your reply.
Sincerely,
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Dear Miss Chan



I would like to thank you for giving me the opportunity for the interview on 31/5/2013.

I am very interested (Beauty Advisor) this position.
I am very serious about joining your company, and I look forward to many more opportunities to understand your company
I hope you can give a second in both the opportunities

Looking forward to your reply

Sincerely,

Dear Miss Chan

I would like to thank you for giving me the opportunity for the interview on 31/5/2013.
I am interested in (Beauty Advisor) this position, and sincerely join your team. I hope to learn more your company, please give me the chance to have a second interview.

Look forward to your reply.

Sincerely,