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﹍I am your big fan from Hong Kong. Your country music is really great, and you often make me smile in different programmes ; always encouraging me and giving me many real treat for your country music power. I love you very much !

﹍I hope you know that there are many fans supporting you in different countries. Don't give up and I will support you forever. Finally, I hope you will come to Hong Kong in the near future. That will be a real treat for fans.

﹍Cheer up !

I am your fan who is from Hong Kong. Your music is really great, and you often made me cheerful in your shows,also encouraged and gave me lots of power. I admire to your talent!!! I hope you know that there are many fans supporting you in different countries. Keep hold of your music and I will support you forever. Finally, I hope you will come to Hong Kong in the near future.
Cheer up!

[Hi, (偶像的名字).] I am your fan from Hong Kong. Your music is really great. [And] you [have always made] me smile [in your different programs], [encouraged] me and gave me [much] power [to face the challenges in my life]. I love you [so] much!! [Moreover, please always remember] that there are [lots of] fans supporting you in different [countries]. [So do not] give up. I will support you forever. Finally, [I am looking forward to your coming] to Hong Kong in the [near] future!

[Wish you all the best and] cheer up!
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I am your fans from Hong Kong.I like your music and singing very much.In many
programmes,your smile often encourage me not to give up and gave me power.
Thank you a lot!
I hope that you will know that, there are many fans like me from different continents,
different countries, different cities to support you now and in the future.Don't give
up, I will support you for the rest of my life.Finally, I hope you will come to Hong Kong for a visit or concert in the future.
Cheer up!

---I am your big fan from Hong Kong. Your country music is really great, and you often make me smile in different programmes ; always encouraging me & giving me many real treat for your country music power. I love you very much !!!
---I hope you know that there are many fans supporting you in different countries. Don't give up and I will support you forever. Finally, I hope you will come to Hong Kong in the near future. That will be a real treat for fans. Cheer up !