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2013-05-25 5:41 am
Hong Kong Disneyland is one of the theme parks in Hong Kong. It always attracted lots of the tourists to visits. Do you know the main reason of why?

Hong Kong Disneyland organizes fun, excited and interesting activity for us to enjoy. Though the price is expensive for us to say. It is worth to try it. There are different kinds of games which are liked by tourists. They usually feel excited even willing to queue for hours. In addition to games, there are sorts of cartoon characters which are loved by tourists. So, many tourists were take photo with them. Sometimes, cartoon characters even hugged by tourists. Especially for children, chatting with them.

In afternoon, it organized a wonderful floats parade, which have became popularity here, in the reason of fun in here. For example, it organized flights of fantasy Parade. First the floats appear in the street. Behind the float, some are silver band who are playing flute. And some dancers who are swing the flag or ribbon. Then, mickey mouse come and join the parade. They wave their hand to welcome us. And then, some cartoon tigers jump and dance in the street near to tourists. Finally, there are many canton characters up and down at the bus stage. Whole parade with music, it has attracted for many people, especially for children. At the dancer dancing, some of children try to following the way of dance to dance. This parade interesting, vivacity in the Disneyland. So, this is one of the reason why many of them to visit Disneyland.

At night, it also organize firework. So, you can see this programme in non-special festival. Also, it always feels better than in Tsim Sha Tsui. The reason of the special setting and music. It let us the feel as if enter to an imaginary world.

When you have pressure from study or work. Enjoy playing in the Disneyland can let you feel relaxed and happy. Also, it always organizes great games, lovely cartoon characters, souvenirs, wonderful parade, firework, etc.

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2013-05-25 6:34 am
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Hong Kong Disneyland is one of the theme parks in Hong Kong. It always attracts lots of the tourists to visit. Do you know the reasons why?

Hong Kong Disneyland organizes fun, exciting and interesting activities for us to enjoy. Although the price is quite expensive to us, it is worth trying it. There are different kinds of games which are liked by tourists. They usually feel excited and are willing to queue for hours. In addition to games, there are sorts of cartoon characters which are loved by tourists. Many tourists want to take photos with them. Sometimes, cartoon characters are hugged by tourists - especially children. They love chatting with them.

In the afternoon, it organizes a wonderful floats parade, which have become popular there, the reason why it's fun there. For example, it organizes flights of fantasy parade. First the floats appear in the streets. Behind the floats, some silver bands are playing the flute. And some dancers are swinging flags or ribbons. Then, Mickey Mouse comes and joins the parade. They wave their hand and welcome us. And then, some cartoon tigers jump and dance in the streets near the tourists. Finally, there are many canton characters up and down on the bus stage. Whole parade with music, it is an attraction to many people, especially to children. When the dancers are dancing, some of the children try to following their way of dancing. This parade is interesting and vivacious in Disneyland. This is one of the reasons why many people want to visit Disneyland.

At night, it also organizes firework. You can see this programme in non-special festival. It always feels better than watching fireworks in Tsim Sha Tsui. The special setting and music make us the feel as if we had entered an imaginary world.

When you have pressure from study or work, enjoy playing in Disneyland. It can make you feel relaxed and happy. Also, it always organizes great games, lovely cartoon characters, souvenirs, wonderful parades, fireworks, etc.

2013-05-24 22:35:14 補充:
It always organizes a lot of activities and we've never seen such a big programme. Let's come and enjoy our trip to Disneyland. It is going to be an unforgettable trip, a happy one.
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2013-05-25 7:22 pm
Hong Kong Disneyland is one of the two theme parks in Hong Kong. It always attracted lots of tourists to visiting. Do you know why?

Hong Kong Disneyland organizes fun, exciting and interesting activities for us to enjoy. Though the price is quite expensive for us, it is worth to try. There are different kinds of games liked by tourists. They are even willing to queue for hours and hours! In addition to games, there are all sorts of cartoon characters loved by tourists. So, many tourists take many photos with them. Sometimes, cartoon characters are even hugged by tourists. They are made especially for children for chatting with them.

In afternoon, it organized a wonderful floats parade, which has became the popularity here. For example, it organized flights of fantasy Parade. First the floats appear in the street. Behind the floats, there is a silver band who are playing flutes, and some dancers who are swinging the flags or ribbons. Then, mickey mouse comes and joins the parade. It waves his hand to welcome us. And then, some cartoon tigers jump and dance in the street near tourists. Finally, there are many cartoon characters up and down at the bus stage. The whole parade is with loud music. It has attracted many people, especially children. As the dancers were dancing, some of children try to follow the dance moves! This parade is interesting, and is the vivacity in the Disneyland. So, this is one of the reason why many of them visit Disneyland.

At night, it also organize fireworks, so you can see the fireworks even in non-special days because it is held every day. Also, The reason of the special setting and music is because it always feels better than in Tsim Sha Tsui. It let us feel as if we enter into an imaginary world.

When you have pressure from study or work, try to enjoy playing in the Disneyland! It can let you feel relaxed and happy. Also, it always organizes great games, lovely cartoon characters, souvenirs, wonderful parade, firework, etc.
2013-05-25 6:41 pm
Hong Kong Disneyland is one of the theme parks in Hong Kong. Italways attractsa lot of tourists to pay a visit. Do you know the main reason for this?
Hong Kong Disneyland organizes fun, exciting and interesting activity for the visitors to enjoy. It’s worthy to visitthis theme park although the price is on the expensive side. The Park offersnumerous types of games for the tourists to enjoy. Tourists usually feel excited despite the factthat they have to wait in line for hours. Moreover, it has a lotof cartoon characters to take pictures with the tourists whom they enjoy to thefullest extent. The cartoon charactersare hugged by the tourists, and they even chat with the children.

In the afternoon, it organizes a wonderful floatsparade which have became apopular feature. Firstly, the floats appear in the street. There are some sliver bands which playflute behind the boat. Mickey Mousejoined the parade and waves its hands to welcome the tourists hence. The fun had not stopped here. Some cartoon tigers and many other cartooncharacters start to dance in the street and at the bus stage afterwards. The entire parade plays music to attract thetourists especially the children. Someof the younger generation even dance with them. The parade is one of the special feature for main attraction. Fireworks will be performed at night timeand its focal points are the setting and music. It certainly makes the tourists feel like they had entered into animaginary world.

Spendinga day in Disneyland is a relaxing activity which can relieve your pressure fromstudy or work. The Disneyland continuesto organize multiple programs to entertain the tourists. Please pay them a visit and you will enjoythe trip. It will become one of yourmost unforgettable trips to cherish for a long time.
2013-05-25 8:53 am
As one of the two theme parks in Hong Kong, the Hong Kong Disneyland has always attracted lots of tourists around the globe. And the main reason behind it is very simple – the theme park offers a wide range of activities that is fun, exciting and interesting throughout the day.

It is undeniable that Hong Kong Disneyland’s tickets are quite expensive. Yet, this does not mean that it is not worth visiting. In fact, there are different kinds of amusement rides liked so much by the tourists that they are even willing to queue for hours just to take a few-minute-long ride. In addition, there are staff who dress in costumes of the tourists’ favourite cartoon characters whom many tourists would take photos with. Sometimes, they will chat and have a big hug with the children too.
In every afternoon, there are wonderful floats parades marching in the park, a popular attraction here known for its fun and fantasy. Usually, the floats would go ahead of all the others in the parade first. Then, following the floats are the silver bands which play the flute, accompanied by dancers swinging flags or ribbons. Next, the Mickey Mouse would come in and join the parade, waving to welcome the tourists watching the parade. And then, some cartoon tigers would jump out and dance near the tourists in the streets. Finally, a fully decorated parade bus would appear, carrying many cartoon characters walking up and down on its stage. The whole parade is full of music. That is why it always attracts many people, especially the children, who sometimes try to imitate the parade dancers. The vivacity of this interesting parade is certainly a part of the reason why many tourists visit the Hong Kong Disneyland.

Last but not least, at night of non-festival days, tourists can see the beautiful fireworks which are considered much better than those in Tsim Sha Tsui. With the special setting and background music, it allows tourists to feel like being in an imaginary world.

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2013-05-25 00:53:53 補充:
So when you have pressure from studies or work. Try spending a day in the Hong Kong Disneyland full of great rides, lovely cartoon characters, beautiful souvenirs, wonderful parades and amazing fireworks. You can always relax and find happiness there!

Let’s come and enjoy the trip to the Hong Kong

2013-05-25 00:54:33 補充:
Disneyland, where amusing activities in the largest scale can be found. The trip would surely be an unforgettable experience and you will be a happy one.

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