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Today, I am going to talk about what I do with my family at the weekend.

Since I was small, the weekends have been reserved for family gatherings. Usually, my family and I would go to a Chinese restaurant near my home in the morning and have dim-sum as breakfast. Following that, we would have a walk in a playground, which is my favourite activity as I can play with other children there. Finally, we would either go shopping in the shopping centre or watch movies at the cinema before we go home. Sometimes, when we are not doing these, we would have a picnic in the country park or visit the theme park.

I feel really happy during the weekend because I can stay with my dearest family whom I have little time to chat with on the weekdays. Therefore, I like the weekends much more than the weekdays, as the weekends are my greatest time in a week.

Thank you.


你嘅開頭好似grammar有啲錯，所以我改咗少少，希望唔好介意。

2013-05-22 20:40:21 補充：
預祝你考試成功，我聽日就考完。

Today I am going to talk about what do I do with my family at weekend. Usually
on the Saturday,I will go to the chinese restaurent to have a wonderful breakfast such as dim sum, chinese noodles with my family . Then, we will go shopping at the shopping centre after breakfast. If not, we will go hiking at (Sai Kung Country Park). [We can spend the whole day after go shopping or hiking.]On the Sunday, we will go to the theme park or cinema too!
I always feel that very happy because I spent a wonderful day with my family, I
also feel so free at the weekends because ( I don't need to go to school and do
the homework).

***其實我係個中學生, 唔知你到邊個程度, 已經盡力作得簡單D, 希望幫到你!
PS. 嗰啲 [括號 ] 你可以因時間而決定講唔講, 因為你冇講個時間
而 (括號 ) 你可以改吓啲內容
啲Gammer 未必啱, 留意一下

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