"The more expensive the hotel, the better the service" is a form of "textual ellipsis", which is defined as: "omitting something that has already been mentioned, or when what is missing is clearly recoverable from the text."
2013-05-14 10:25:15 補充:
Continued from above:
The original sentence is: "The more expensive the hotel is, the better the service will be".
Similar sentences with the verb(s) omitted are:
"the sooner, the better".
"the more, the merrier".
2013-05-14 10:30:39 補充:
This kind of sentences are commonly used (some are idioms), and are acceptable in formal written English.
例如可以說:we chose this hotel because the more expensive the hotel, the better the service.
樓上的那一位:
more is an adjective, not a verb.
2013-05-15 21:13:20 補充:
they can be used in language as idioms, but they are NOT sentences!!! try typing it on microsoft Word, it will be identified as an error