english oral assessment

The followings are problems of children arising from lack of care by their parents who have lengthen hours of working:
1) They can't take care of themselves without any guideline or discipline at home;
2) They can't keep up with the demand of academic educational studies;
3) They are easily contracted with others who might be with bad behaviour;
4) They might be wandering up and down without studying or doing their homework or assigments.

1. Children do not receive enough concern from their parents in regards to physical as well as mental well-beings.2. There is barely enough time for communication between both parties, consequently, parents fail to have a thorough understanding of their academic progress at school and their thinking.3. The parents will have no idea as to what kind of social circle they are running into, and thus they might end up hanging out with the wrong type of friends.4. Without the proper guidance from parents, children might have a higher tendency of committing crimes.

problems
1.children's parents have no time to communicate with them.
2.children can't get enough concern
3.children don't want to back home and they may stayed in the street with
some bad people
4.children don't get attention and they may be lazy.

2013-05-02 22:14:25 補充：
SORRY.number 4 should be
children don't get attention and they may become lazy.

2013-05-02 22:17:58 補充：
therefore their result will become worse.
5.the family may always quarrel with one another.They can't live happily and peacefully together.