He wanted to steal the ring and send them to hell. Luckily,a pirate passed by and
rescue them.
( 1 mistake)
proofreading,邊度錯??
2013-04-30 2:59 am
回答 (5)
2013-04-30 7:53 am
✔ 最佳答案
因為Steal同send前面有to,,to後面係咩刀唔洗轉的=]'
->he wanted to steal the ring
->he wanted to send them to hell
+埋就係he wanted to steal the ring and send them to hell.
therefore,,個mistake係rescue要轉pass tense(因為pass by係pass tense)
-->rescued
希望幫到你=]'
參考: 自己^^
2013-04-30 12:22 pm
He wanted to steal the ringS and send them to hell. (rings need to be plural, because "send them to hell", them is plural and refers to the rings)
可將句子看成這樣：
he wanted to steal the rings. He wanted to send them to hell.
用"and"拼合兩個句子，前面相同的"he wanted to"就不必重復，變成：
he wanted to steal the ring and send it to hell.
所以用send, not sent
Luckily, a pirate passed by and rescued them.
Rescued 應用過去式，因為passed by 用了過去式。
可將句子看成這樣：
he wanted to steal the rings. He wanted to send them to hell.
用"and"拼合兩個句子，前面相同的"he wanted to"就不必重復，變成：
he wanted to steal the ring and send it to hell.
所以用send, not sent
Luckily, a pirate passed by and rescued them.
Rescued 應用過去式，因為passed by 用了過去式。
2013-04-30 3:42 am
★Proofreading★
※錯誤的句子:
He wanted to steal the ring and send them to hell. Luckily,a pirate passed by and rescue them.( 1 mistake)
※錯誤的地方:
1.Rescue應改為→Rescued
※錯誤的原因:
1.成篇文章講嘅係過去嘅嘢，所以全部verb都要用past tense架!!!☺
※正確的句子:
He wanted to steal the ring and send them to hell. Luckily,a pirate passed by and (rescued) them.( 0 mistake)
※錯誤的句子:
He wanted to steal the ring and send them to hell. Luckily,a pirate passed by and rescue them.( 1 mistake)
※錯誤的地方:
1.Rescue應改為→Rescued
※錯誤的原因:
1.成篇文章講嘅係過去嘅嘢，所以全部verb都要用past tense架!!!☺
※正確的句子:
He wanted to steal the ring and send them to hell. Luckily,a pirate passed by and (rescued) them.( 0 mistake)
參考: ♀ME!!!♫希望可以幫倒忙LA!!!~(￣▽￣)~*
2013-04-30 3:29 am
the ring and send it
2013-04-30 3:04 am
rescue ------> rescued
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