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2013-04-15 10:01 pm
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Hello students, I am education officer of Greenpeace. My name is leung chi kong. I have eight years of work in Greenpeace. Before the job is action coordinator. The job is in charge of protection of forests .Today, I'm going to speak about the crisis global warming. l know you have actually received a lot of information. Some students may want to slow down global warming the crisis with use of limited powers. I came here wish provide some experience to you.

There are several areas of the work of Greenpeace except to Protect Forests. In addition Still will do Stop Climate Change、Eliminate Toxic Chemicals、Defending Our Oceans、Safeguarding Food & Agriculture and Reduce Air Pollution. We investigate, expose and confront environmental abuse by governments and corporations around the world. We promote open, informed debate about society's environmental choices. We champion environmentally responsible and socially just solutions, including scientific and technological innovation.

I think as Form five students can try to the attempt and friends more discussion related Environmental protection Problem. Let your friends can think more Environmental protection Problem. But if your friends are not interested in environmental protection. Not reluctantly! Otherwise you will lose this friend. To make own become media. I think Attention and dissemination are Important.

If friends around you in interest is not Environmental protection. You can join Some Related Environmental protection Workshops, You will can find some Likeminded to people. Will be more effective to promote some of the ideas.

If Your friends are not interested in discuss environmental protection, can From everyday life contribute to the environmental protection. of example; You can not eat meat only vegetarian. Because production of meat requires a lot of resources.
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According to a United Nations report concluded that “he livestock tsector generates more greenhouse gas emissions as measured in carbon dioxide equivalent than transport.”

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The 400-page report by the Food and Agricultural Organisation, entitled Livestock's Long Shadow, also surveys the damage done by sheep, chickens, pigs and goats. But in almost every case, the world's 1.5 billion cattle are most to blame.

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Livestock are responsible for 18 per cent of the greenhouse gases that cause global warming, more than cars, planes and all other forms of transport put together.

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If still feel very difficult,i think you can from everyday life more details proceed with.can prepare their own chopsticks. Reducing the use of disposable wooden chopsticks .and the use handkerchief reduce the use of paper towels.More can be repeated supplies instead of disposable items.

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My proposal may is negligible but we can do it.

回答 (6)

2013-04-15 11:13 pm
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I have eight years of work in Greenpeace.
Correction : I have eight years of working exprience with Greenpeace.
Before the job is action coordinator.
Correction : My previous job is an action coordinator.
I came here wish provide some experience to you.
Correction : I am here today to share some of my exprience with all of you.

There are several areas of the work of Greenpeace except to Protect Forests. In addition Still will do Stop Climate Change、Eliminate Toxic Chemicals、Defending Our Oceans、Safeguarding Food & Agriculture and Reduce Air Pollution.
Correction : Greenpeace doesn't only involved in Protecting Forests but there are other areas of work in Greenpeace such as Stop Climate Change、Eliminate Toxic Chemicals、Defending Our Oceans、Safeguarding Food & Agriculture and Reduce Air Pollution.

I think as Form five students can try to the attempt and friends more discussion related Environmental protection Problem. Let your friends can think more Environmental protection Problem. But if your friends are not interested in environmental protection. Not reluctantly! Otherwise you will lose this friend. To make own become media. I think Attention and dissemination are Important.
Correction: I think as a form five student,you can try to share and discuss enviromental protection issue with your friends.Let the people around you to be have enviromental protention awareness.If your friend show no interest on such topic, do not force them to take part, else you will lose them. Your own involvement should be focus on public awareness and educate the important of enviromental protection.

2013-04-15 15:15:51 補充:
Limited words.I cant finish
You may mail me.
[email protected]
2013-04-16 5:48 am
您好學生,我是綠色和平組織教育主任。我的名字叫梁志港。綠色和平組織八年的工作了作業前行動協調員。工作就是負責保護森林。今天,我要談一談危機全球變暖。我知道你其實已收到很多的資訊。有些學生可能會想要減緩全球變暖的危機與有限權力的使用。我來這裡想向你提供一些經驗。有幾個方面的工作除了保護森林的綠色和平組織。此外還將做停止氣候 Change、Eliminate 有毒 Chemicals、Defending 我們 Oceans、Safeguarding 食品 & 農業和減少空氣污染。我們調查、 揭露和麵對各國政府和公司在世界各地的環境濫用。我們提倡開放、 知情辯論有關社會的環境選擇。我們宣導對環境負責、 對社會公正的解決辦法,包括科學和技術創新。我覺得作為表單的五個學生可以嘗試,嘗試和朋友更多討論有關環境保護問題。讓你的朋友們可以認為更多的環境保護問題。但如果你的朋友不感興趣環境保護。不要勉強 !否則你將失去這位朋友。為使自己成為媒體。我覺得注意和傳播是重要的。如果你周圍的朋友感興趣的不是環境保護。你可以加入一些相關環境保護研討會,您將可以找到一些志同道合的人。將更有效地促進的一些想法。如果你的朋友不感興趣在討論環境保護,可以從日常生活促進環境保護。示例 ;你不能吃肉只素食。因為肉的生產需要大量的資源。聯合國報告的結論是"他牲畜 tsector 更多溫室氣體排放量來衡量中生成二氧化碳當量比運輸"。400 頁的報告由糧食及農業組織,題為牲畜的長長的陰影,還調查了羊、 雞、 豬、 羊所造成的損害。但幾乎每一種情況下,在世界上 15 億牛最大責任。牲畜是負責 18 % 的溫室氣體導致全球變暖,更多的汽車、 飛機和所有其他形式的交通工具放在一起。如果仍感覺很困難,我想你更多的細節可以從日常生活著手 with.can 編寫他們自己的筷子。減少使用一次性木筷還有使用手帕減少紙毛巾的使用。更多可以反復的用品而不是一次性的專案。我的提議可能是微不足道的但我們能做到。

這是中翻,大部份都很好!
參考: 由於我是BB級數(得-7点),有錯,請原諒...﹌~﹌
2013-04-16 5:42 am
Hello students, I am the education officer from Greenpeace. My name is Leung Chi Kong. I have been working in Greenpeace for eight years. Before this job as an education officer, I was an action coordinator. An action coordinator is in charge of protection of forests .Today, I'm going to talk about the crisis of global warming. l know everybody has received a lot of information about it. Some students may think that they want to slow down the global warming crisis with use of limited personal power. I come here and wish to provide some experience to all of you.

I prefer to use short sentences for speech style.
2013-04-16 4:43 am
very good!!!!!!
2013-04-15 11:21 pm
Hello students, I am education officer of Greenpeace. My name is leung chi kong. This is my eight years work with Greenpeace. I used to work as an action coordinator, which is about forest protection. Today, I'm going to talk about the global warming crisis. You might hear it before. However, some of you may help us to slow down this crisis with decrease the usage of powers. I am here to share with some of my experience to you.

We work at several areas except Forests Protection. In addition, we use creative, non-violent confrontation to raise the level and quality of public debate. Nature recognizes no frontiers or national boundaries. GPEA is part of a global organization. We address cross-border environmental challenges and leverage global intelligence and resources. We are a credible organization that deploys independent investigation, research and actions to highlight environmental problems as well as solutions. We ensure our financial independence from political or commercial interests. Greenpeace does not solicit or accept funding from governments, corporations or political parties. Greenpeace neither seeks nor accepts donations that could compromise its independence, aims, objectives or integrity. Individual supporters and foundations are our only source of financial support.
in my opinion you can try to the attempt with friends more discussion related Environmental protection Problem. Let your friends think more about Environmental protection. However, if your friends not interest in environmental protection, than let it go. Don’t push them! Otherwise you will might lost them. Please make yourself as a media. Let everyone attention and dissemination the right.

2013-04-15 15:22:17 補充:
If you interest in Environmental protection, you might join some related to Environmental protection organization. You can find some people like you would be care those ideas.
2013-04-15 11:12 pm
遍文都得!!!!!!

**leung chi kong = Leung Chi Kong**
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