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My boss has confirmed the order of 20 computers to be used at our store. Please arrange and notify us the installation date.

2013-04-13 04:36:34 補充：
Po Yee has incorrect verb agreements in his/her first sentence.
Ling needs to make sure "computer" is in plural.

我老板已確認order 20部電腦在我們店舖使用。煩請安排給我們和告知安裝日期。
As there were twenty computers which had been ordered by our shopkeeper for uuage; please advise us what will be the day of delivery and installation.

My boss has already confirmed to order 20 computers into our shops for using. Please arrange for us and tell us the date of installation.

My boss has confirmed an order of 20 computers in our shop. Please arrange to us and inform the installation date

My boss has confirmed the order of 20 computers in our shop. I should be grateful if arrangements to us and inform the date of installation.

Dear xxxxx

My boss has already confirmed the order of 20 computer to be used in our shops. Please kindly notify us regarding the installation date.

Thanks and look forward to having your reply.

Yours sincerely,
xxxxxxx

My boss has already confirm to order 20 computers to our shop. Could you please tell us the date of giving the computer and setting?

My boss had confirmed for the order of 20 pcs of computer to install at our shop area. Kindly arrange it for us and inform me the installation date.