英文....Help me...急.20點

(1)She likes to listen to CDs.
(2)She has many CDs at home.
(3)She listens to CDs every day.
(4)She is good at playing the piano.
(5)She has piano lessons every Monday and Thursday.
(6)She is good at singing too.
(7)On Saturdays,she sometimes go to a concert.
(8)But Maggie does not like sports.
(9)She cannot play badminton.
(10)She cannot swim either.
(11)Maggie is helping at home.
(12)She looks after her baby brother.

2013-04-07 03:50:35 補充：
Thanks, I got your feedback.
Hello Kitty missed a few points any way (5,10,12).

2013-04-07 16:22:22 補充：
Sel, every "Mondays" is incorrect. Also, if you look at the context, Maggie is looking "after" her baby brother, instead of just looking "at" him. Number 12 is about making more sense cohesively rather than grammatically.

(1)She likes listens to Cds.有甚麼錯?
-> 1)likes是動詞，後面要用 Gerund （動名詞）或不定式動詞（infinitive）to + verb格式，即把動詞轉為ing格式。 應是She likes listening to Cds.
(2)She has any CDs at home.有甚麼錯? 句子翻譯後：她家中有任何CDs
1)any不是這樣使用
2) any任何一個也是一個，不會出現CDs
3) 你應該是用a lot of / many 意思同是許多。

2013-04-12 20:57:57 補充：
(3)She listen to CDs every day.有甚麼錯?
這個錯在listen 無加上s。
He, She, It, 人物 的動詞都要加s。
(4)She is good at play the piano.有甚麼錯?
同樣要用 Gerund （動名詞）。play the piano--> playing the piano
句子也有怪，用 She plays the piano very well. 比較順暢。

2013-04-12 20:58:17 補充：
(5)She has piano lessons every Mondays and Thursday.有甚麼錯?
無加上「in/on/at」等介系詞，應該是 on every Mondays and Thursday
(6)She is good at sings too.有甚麼錯?
同樣是後面要用 Gerund （動名詞）。 sings--> singing

2013-04-12 20:58:28 補充：
(7)On Saturdays,she sometimes going to a concert.有甚麼錯?
On Saturdays,she sometimes going to a concert.
這句錯得很嚴重。
1) 時間通常放於後面。
2) 不會無原因地使用ing格式，又無動詞
3) a/an/the 冠詞要用得合適，不知你這個concert是否有指定？若有要用the，無便要用a。
4) 參加/與應用 Join/ Take part in/Attend
用Take part in適合些。
正確應該為：She sometimes takes part in to the concer

2013-04-12 20:58:38 補充：
(8)But Maggie do not like sports.有甚麼錯?
But 開首不太適合， sport 是一個名詞，前要加一個動詞來做這個名詞（動作），而現在要用動名詞 playing/ doing，原因不解釋。
(9)She cannot plays badminton.有甚麼錯?
can 是modal verb情態動詞，後面的動詞不用加s。
(10)She cannot swim too.有甚麼錯?
這句應該無錯的，但too前要加個 "," 。真的錯應該是cannot 用得不對，他不是不可以swin，應該是不會， don't know how to swim.

2013-04-12 20:58:46 補充：
(11)Maggie is help at home.有甚麼錯?
is 跟help 都是動詞，所以這情況下並不會一起用，我也不明你想表示什麼，不會修改。
(12)She looks at her baby brother.有甚麼錯?
這句也不明白你的意思，應該無錯才是。

2013-04-12 21:01:50 補充：
4) 參加/與應用 Join/ Take part in/Attend
用Take part in適合些。
正確應該為：She sometimes takes part in to the concer -->concert
字數過了，打少了個t。

(1)she likes to listen to CDs.
It is because after the word "like", every tense stays the same and u need to add the "to" word.

(2)she has many Cds at home.
it is because the word "any" is used in negative sentences and questions.

(3)she listens to Cds everyday.
it is because after the word "he","she","it", the verb must add "s"

(4)she is good at playing the piano.
it is because after the words "good at", you should add "ing"

(5) she has piano lessons every Mondays and thursdays.
it is because u did not add the "s" in the thursday(there is many thursdays in a
year.

(6)she is good at singing too.
like i said, after the words "good at", you should add "ing".

(7)On Saturdays, she sometimes goes to a concert.
it is because, if u want to use "going", there should be "is" in front of it.

(8)but maggie does not like sports.
like i said ,after the word "he","she","it", the verb must add "s"

(9)she cannot play badminton.
it is because after the word Can, the word stays unchanged.

(10)she cannot swim too.
there is nothing wrong in this sentence.

(11) Maggie is helping at home.
after the words "are" and "is",the word after it should add "ing"

(12) She is looking at her baby brother.
it is because u r talking about the present.

1.She likes listening to Cds.
2.She has many CDs at home.
3.She listens CDs every day.
4.She is good at playing the piano.
5.She has piano lessons every Mondays and Thursday.
6.She is good at singing too.
7.On Saturday, she sometimes goes to concert.
8.But Maggid does not like sports.
9.She cannot play badminton.
10.She cannot swim too.
11.Maggie is helping at home.
12.She looks at her baby brother.