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Why am I love it so late?
before I felt ”it” so boring and think of the schoolmates are strange that love it so much. When some talker , professional people come in the school hall told me about it is healthy , good for us .I didn’t change my feeling of it . ‘It is fake , it wasting time , let people get tire . And sometime it is a trouble maker , there are numerous news telling us that the lost hider seek help , football player hurt his leg when he played football…Yes, it is Sport . I do not like it before but after the summer I change my feeling of it.

I have taken up a new sport as a hobby . It is swimming. One day my family bring me to watch the Dragon Boat Competition .My uncle was chosen to be his team’s leader , he told me that he had high pressure but so excited at the match. The day I enjoyed the wonderful competition and appeared the water is amazing . At last time I call it danger but now I find it is awesome .There are some sports do with water .I enjoy the cool hug form this Mr. Water so I take up swimming to be my new interest .I also join the swimming class recently for hoping that can learn more knowledge of swim.

Then let me tell you about the benefits of sport . Surly people touch sport because they want to be health , keep fit and pick up a nice body shape. While sport bring the mental effects , it also affects our health of psychological . After sport body will train to be stronger , people will become more powerful and have high confident to show others their bodies. Moreover when sport start the player will set the targets for themselves such as increasing their sport time each time . As a result player feel gratify for complete the goals , they set for themselves .Sport also have team work ,player can meet more people or have a good relationship with their friends through the sport easily. That seem sport have advantages not only the psychological and mental development but also the difference community circle.