Part B: going on working holidays become more common among local young people. Write an article for your school magazine advising your fellow students on what they should consider before deciding to go on a working holiday .Sign your name ‘Chris Wong’
Think thoroughly before your working holidays
Working holiday is praised by young people in recent years. On the one hand , they can have a relax time in foreign country, On the other hand , they can gain money without hard . Having such rare chance to go on working holidays , some people may not think thoroughly before applying for working holidays. In my opinion , there are several consideration in prior to go on working holidays.
The first question you should ask yourself is : Do you have language ability? You should consider the country you want to go whether you are enough to handle the language because you may be faced any problems in foreign country such as you getting stray. In this case , can you clearly enquire local passers-by ? At least you should know well to English that it is common language in the worldwide. This is the basic qualification that can guarantee you will go well during working holidays.
As working holidays are common holding long times, without your parents accompanying , do you have self-care to cope with daily life? Washing your clothes,
Cooking your meal so on. While you are in foreign country , the environment change completely , your parents will not stand by you and all things you should deal with alone. All things only rely on yourself. If you have no confidence , it’s not suitable for you to travel in distant places.
Another you should consider is your studies . As you are in adolescence , nothing important than your studies. In prior to apply for working holidays, ensure yourself your studies is not bad and imagine that if you come back from working holidays,
DSE英文Writing Part B 求改
2013-03-26 10:37 pm
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2013-03-27 1:13 am
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Working holiday …. On [] one hand, they can have a relax time in a foreign country; on the other hand, they can earn [gain的中文係「增加」/「得到」唔係「賺」] money without hard ???work. Having …, … for it[唔識用pronoun]. In my opinion, there are several considerations[subject-verb agreement] [] prior to going on working holidays.The first question… is: Do you have the language ability? You should consider whether you can [enough錯字-中文:足夠?] [] handle the language in the country you want to go because you may be facing [不是被動式][] problems in a foreign country such as [subject一直都是you無需每節重覆] getting stray. In such a case, can you [clearly用錯adv] [enquire用錯字-詢問] ask local people to help you[passers-by用錯字]? At least …[to錯pp] English well because it is common language [in the錯-省去] worldwide. This is the basic skills [qualification用錯字-學業或專業的資格] that [] guarantee you will do well ….
As working holidays are [common holding long times完全中文:通常維持一段長時間?] generally last for a long time, … , do you have self-care skill to cope with daily life? Washing your clothes, cooking your meal, and so on. While you are in a foreign country, the environment changes completely, … and all things you have to deal with alone. You can only rely on yourself to handle everything. [全句寫錯subjec-verb-object] If you have no confidence, it’s … to travel to [distant用錯字-距離/遠處] far away places.
Another thing you …. As you are an adolescence,[是這人的角色而不是成長階段] nothing is more important than …. [] Prior [自創的英文] to applying for working holidays, you need to ensure [] your studies are not bad. [這句到止為止] [] Imagine that …., can you still catch up [follow用錯字-跟隨][你想講:跟上] your studies you have missed. Working holidays just occupy [few用錯字-少] [time用錯字-時間不等時段或時期] a short period so it is …. This can make your experience meaningful.[句子文法啱但組合起來「講東講西」-改不了] A Working holiday[] is …, yet …all aspects of risks[以上提出的都不是英文的problems],[ don ‘t take it easy差的加插片語-反面是serious about it]. I hope all of you are ready for all the above and … working holiday[].
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2013-03-27 1:58 am
Jenkin,
They write, not type in exams. Therefore, it doesnt matter.
2013-03-26 18:06:28 補充：
Jenkin,
You have always been giving useful advice here. I am sure a lot of people would benefit.
They write, not type in exams. Therefore, it doesnt matter.
2013-03-26 18:06:28 補充：
Jenkin,
You have always been giving useful advice here. I am sure a lot of people would benefit.
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