20分 急急急急....口講的speech 關於介紹一個書中的人物,,幫我改一改d grammer,,,意思請保留..thx
good morning everyone,for the next few minutes,i will be introducing a character named judy boone in the book titled'the curious incident of the dog in the night-time,whi is the mother of christopher.and i want to ask what is your impression of her?selfish?irresponibile?Yes,she is.
Firstly,she is irresponibile to her marriage.legally,they have signed the certificate of marriage,but she still had the intimate relationship with mr shears,and she left his husband without divorce.So i really think she is irresponilible to her marriage and her husband.
Secondly,she is irresponilible to her son,christopher. christopher is an autistic bot,so he needs extra cares.but she didnt do it,and she thinks he is troublesome ,hard to care ,so she left him.she is really responilible to her son.
Thirdly,she is also irresponibile to mr shears.after she left chistopher and his father,she was having a satifice life and they had settled down all their things.But when chistopher came and find her,then she drove mr shears' car to his own town without telling mr shears.she fell away mr shears without discussing.she is irreponibile to him.
And what we can learn from her case because we can treat it as a negative examgle.you guys are teenagers at this monent.But in the future,before you get married,please think about if there is any agruing between you and your mate,are you able to solve it.and before you decide to have a child ,think twice ,because your child may have some problems like your chils is handicapped or autistic.please think about are you able to take care of your child. thank you
plz correct my grammer mistake
2013-03-22 4:38 am
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2013-03-22 2:38 pm
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Good morning everyone,for the next few minutes,I will be introducing a character known as judy boone in the book titled "the curious incident of the dog in the night-time", who is the mother of Christopher and I want to ask what is your impression on her daughter? Is she selfish or irresponibile?Yes, generally speaking she is.Firstly,she is irresponsible to her legal marriage,when she and her husband have signed the certificate of marriage, but she still has had the intimate relationship with Mr.Shears; and left his husband without divorce. So I really think she is irresponilible to her marriage.
Secondly,she is irresponilible to her son,Christopher. As her son is an autistic boy,so he needs extra cares.but she haven't do it and thinks he is hard to take care,and then left him.She is really irresponilible to her son.
Thirdly,she is also irresponibile to Mr Shears after she left Chistopher and his father,she has living a satisfying life after had solved all their things. But when Chistopher came to find her,then she drove Mr Shears' car to his own town secretly without telling him.So she is irreponibile to him.
In conclusion,what we can learn from her case because we can treat it as a negative one. As you guys are teenagers at this age and in the future,if you are getting married,you should think before to have a child and also any argument between you and your mate should be solved beforehand otherwise think twice ,because your child may have some problems such as handicapped or autistic.please think before you are able to take care of your child. Thank you for listening.
參考: Partly according to The Advanced Learner Dictionary of Current English with Chinese Translation by Oxford University Press in 1975
2013-03-23 4:19 am
---Please correct your Grammar mistakes 20 for error and correction for her case as a bad example:----
(1)Don't left her husband w/o a divorce and find Mr. Shear.
(2)Don't left the autistic child (=severe mental) Christopher!
(3)Don't drive crazy his car w/o asking!
(4)Don't argue for teenages before marriage to prevent them from getting an autistic child !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
(1)Don't left her husband w/o a divorce and find Mr. Shear.
(2)Don't left the autistic child (=severe mental) Christopher!
(3)Don't drive crazy his car w/o asking!
(4)Don't argue for teenages before marriage to prevent them from getting an autistic child !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
2013-03-22 11:22 pm
有太多錯子和句子結構或許未能修正的。
i will introduce a character
First, .... Second, .... Third,
irresponsible[串錯字]
she left her husband without a divorce.
an autistic boy, so he needs extra care.
she was having a satisfying[唔知你串個乜字] life and they had settled down all their things.[這句唔知你想講乜]
But when chistopher came and find her, then she drove mr shears' car to his own town without telling mr shears.[個仔來找她，之後她(沒有問)搶了男人的車駛去他家鄉。前因後果完全不合邏輯的，無論是時序和行為都沒有關係的！]
she fell away[未見過fall away這詞，唔知你想表達乜]
And [] we can learn from her case (because we can treat it)[可省去] as a bad example[串錯字].[negative不一定=英譯中的「負面」例子。] you [] are teenagers at this moment[串錯字],[這句完全無意義的] [but in the future][這句亦無作用的] [可以從這裏開始] before you get married, please think about if there is any arguing[串錯字] between you and your mate,
your child may have some problems like being handicapped or autistic. please think about if you are able to
i will introduce a character
First, .... Second, .... Third,
irresponsible[串錯字]
she left her husband without a divorce.
an autistic boy, so he needs extra care.
she was having a satisfying[唔知你串個乜字] life and they had settled down all their things.[這句唔知你想講乜]
But when chistopher came and find her, then she drove mr shears' car to his own town without telling mr shears.[個仔來找她，之後她(沒有問)搶了男人的車駛去他家鄉。前因後果完全不合邏輯的，無論是時序和行為都沒有關係的！]
she fell away[未見過fall away這詞，唔知你想表達乜]
And [] we can learn from her case (because we can treat it)[可省去] as a bad example[串錯字].[negative不一定=英譯中的「負面」例子。] you [] are teenagers at this moment[串錯字],[這句完全無意義的] [but in the future][這句亦無作用的] [可以從這裏開始] before you get married, please think about if there is any arguing[串錯字] between you and your mate,
your child may have some problems like being handicapped or autistic. please think about if you are able to
2013-03-22 5:28 am
Good morning everyone. For next few minutes, I will introduce a character called Judy Boone in the book title the curious incident of the dog in the night-time, who is the mother of christopher. Now I want to ask what is your impression of her? Selfish? Irresponibile? Yes, she is.
Firstly, Judy is irresponibile to her marriage. Legally, they have signed the certificate of marriage but she still had an intimate relationship with Mr Shears. She left his husband without divorce so I really think she is irresponilible to her marriage and husband.
Secondly, Judy is irresponilible to her son, Christopher. He is an autistic bot so he needs extra cares. But she didn’t do it. She thinked he was troublesome and hard to care so she left him. For above-mentioned instance, she is really responilible to her son.
Thirdly, Judy is also irresponibile to Mr Shears. After she left Chistopher and his father, she was having a satifice life and they had settled down all their things. When Chistopher came and found Judy, she drove Mr Shears' car to his own town without told to Mr Shears. She fell away Mr Shears without discussing so she is irreponibile to him.
What we can learn from Judy’s case is we can treat it as a negative examgle. Your guys are teenagers at this monent. In future, before you get married, please think about if there is any agruing between you and your mate. You are able to solve it. Before you decide to have a child, think twice because your child may have some problems. Like your child is handicapped or autistic. Please think about you are able to take care of your child. Thank you.
Firstly, Judy is irresponibile to her marriage. Legally, they have signed the certificate of marriage but she still had an intimate relationship with Mr Shears. She left his husband without divorce so I really think she is irresponilible to her marriage and husband.
Secondly, Judy is irresponilible to her son, Christopher. He is an autistic bot so he needs extra cares. But she didn’t do it. She thinked he was troublesome and hard to care so she left him. For above-mentioned instance, she is really responilible to her son.
Thirdly, Judy is also irresponibile to Mr Shears. After she left Chistopher and his father, she was having a satifice life and they had settled down all their things. When Chistopher came and found Judy, she drove Mr Shears' car to his own town without told to Mr Shears. She fell away Mr Shears without discussing so she is irreponibile to him.
What we can learn from Judy’s case is we can treat it as a negative examgle. Your guys are teenagers at this monent. In future, before you get married, please think about if there is any agruing between you and your mate. You are able to solve it. Before you decide to have a child, think twice because your child may have some problems. Like your child is handicapped or autistic. Please think about you are able to take care of your child. Thank you.
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