我的英文水平不好，很多時求職send e-mail都沒有回覆，連見工的機會都沒有，相信是send e-mail時d英文錯漏百出，所以懇請各位替本人修正以下e-mail的內容。第一段我是想表達自己4年曾於地盤做文件工作，而近一年開始負責埋admin工作。而第三段是想表達自己的工作位置因冇網絡而請對方留口訊或回e-mail。
Dear xx,
I am interested to apply for position of Clerk, which was posted at website of JDB (Ref.: xxxxx) on 1 Jan 2013. I have five years experience in construction company of which four years responsible for the paper work at sites. Recently year, I also became responsible for handling administrative work. For computer skills, I am familiar with Microsoft Word, Excel, internal, Outlook and Chinese character input method.
Enclosed please find my resume for my detailed personal information for your perusal. If you would like to know more about my ability, I can be available for an interview at any time convenient to you.
I apologize for my duty location impact of mobile disconnected, if fortunate to have a chance to interview, please stay voice message or send e-mail for contact, I will reply as soon as possible.
Best regards,
請幫忙修正英文求職信
2013-03-11 7:11 am
回答 (5)
2013-03-18 5:38 pm
Dear xx,
According to your website of JDB (Ref.: xxxxx) on 1 Jan 2013. I am eager to apply for the post of clerical clerk, As I have been working five years in a construction company during that period four years for the paper work at sites and one year for administrative work. For computer skills, I am familiar with Microsoft Word, Excel, internet, Outlook Express and Chinese character inputting method.
Attached please find my resume for your perusal. And your consideration about my application and granting me an interview would be deeply appreciated .
I Best regards,
Name and email address and telephone no.
According to your website of JDB (Ref.: xxxxx) on 1 Jan 2013. I am eager to apply for the post of clerical clerk, As I have been working five years in a construction company during that period four years for the paper work at sites and one year for administrative work. For computer skills, I am familiar with Microsoft Word, Excel, internet, Outlook Express and Chinese character inputting method.
Attached please find my resume for your perusal. And your consideration about my application and granting me an interview would be deeply appreciated .
I Best regards,
Name and email address and telephone no.
參考: Partly according to The Advanced Learner Dictionary of Current English with Chinese Translation by Oxford University Press in 1975
2013-03-14 7:45 pm
Dear xx,
I am writing to apply for the position of a Clerk posted at the website of JDB (Ref.: xxxxx) on 1 Jan 2013. I have been working in a construction company for five years, of which the first four years are mainly on daily routine paper work at construction sites. This year, I was required to handle administrative work also.
For computer skills, I am familiar with Microsoft Word, Excel, Outlook, Internet web browser, and Chinese word processing.
I enclose herewith my resume for your kind perusal. If you would like to know more about my abilities and my working experience, I can attend an interview at any time convenient to you.
You may leave a voice message or send e-mail to me as my mobile network may not always be connected at my working places. I will confirm your interview appointment as soon as possiblr. Contact Phone No.: 12345678
e-mail address: [email protected]
Sincerely,
2013-03-14 11:51:38 補充：
其實, 樓上高人的改動已很好的了
我只是.晝蛇漆足罷
I am writing to apply for the position of a Clerk posted at the website of JDB (Ref.: xxxxx) on 1 Jan 2013. I have been working in a construction company for five years, of which the first four years are mainly on daily routine paper work at construction sites. This year, I was required to handle administrative work also.
For computer skills, I am familiar with Microsoft Word, Excel, Outlook, Internet web browser, and Chinese word processing.
I enclose herewith my resume for your kind perusal. If you would like to know more about my abilities and my working experience, I can attend an interview at any time convenient to you.
You may leave a voice message or send e-mail to me as my mobile network may not always be connected at my working places. I will confirm your interview appointment as soon as possiblr. Contact Phone No.: 12345678
e-mail address: [email protected]
Sincerely,
2013-03-14 11:51:38 補充：
其實, 樓上高人的改動已很好的了
我只是.晝蛇漆足罷
2013-03-11 10:59 pm
Dear xx,
I am writing to apply for the position of Clerk [] posted at website of JDB (Ref.: xxxxx) on 1 Jan 2013. I have five years experience working in a construction company, of which four years on paper work at sites and this past year handles administrative work. For computer skills, I am familiar with Microsoft Word, Excel, Outlook, Internet web browser, and Chinese word processing.
Enclosed please find my resume [] for your perusal. If you would like to know more about my working ability, I am available for an interview at any time convenient to you.
Please leave a voice message or send e-mail to my contacts as the mobile network may not always get connected at construction sites, I will confirm the appointment as soon as I can. Contact Phone No.: XXXXXXXXe-mail address: zzzzzzzzzzzz@ZZZZ
Sincerely,
I am writing to apply for the position of Clerk [] posted at website of JDB (Ref.: xxxxx) on 1 Jan 2013. I have five years experience working in a construction company, of which four years on paper work at sites and this past year handles administrative work. For computer skills, I am familiar with Microsoft Word, Excel, Outlook, Internet web browser, and Chinese word processing.
Enclosed please find my resume [] for your perusal. If you would like to know more about my working ability, I am available for an interview at any time convenient to you.
Please leave a voice message or send e-mail to my contacts as the mobile network may not always get connected at construction sites, I will confirm the appointment as soon as I can. Contact Phone No.: XXXXXXXXe-mail address: zzzzzzzzzzzz@ZZZZ
Sincerely,
2013-03-11 10:18 am
Dear xx,
I am interested to apply for the Clerk position which wasposted on the JDB website (Ref.: xxxxx) dated 1 Jan 2013. I have five yearsexperience in a construction company of which four years were solelyresponsible for the paper work at sites. I got more involved in handlingadministrative work for the recent year. As far as computer skills is concerned, I am proficientwith the Microsoft Office software applications and Chinese character inputmethod.
Enclosed please find my resume for your perusal. I hope I will be granted for an interview, sothat I can explain my qualifications thoroughly. I can be reached at 9777-7777 or you canemail me at [email protected]. Looking forward to your early reply.
Best regards,
I am interested to apply for the Clerk position which wasposted on the JDB website (Ref.: xxxxx) dated 1 Jan 2013. I have five yearsexperience in a construction company of which four years were solelyresponsible for the paper work at sites. I got more involved in handlingadministrative work for the recent year. As far as computer skills is concerned, I am proficientwith the Microsoft Office software applications and Chinese character inputmethod.
Enclosed please find my resume for your perusal. I hope I will be granted for an interview, sothat I can explain my qualifications thoroughly. I can be reached at 9777-7777 or you canemail me at [email protected]. Looking forward to your early reply.
Best regards,
2013-03-11 7:39 am
I am interested to apply for the position of Clerk, which was posted at website of JDB (Ref.: xxxxx) on 1 Jan 2013. I have five years experience of working in construction company which includes four years responsibility for the paper work inside sites. Recent year, I have been promoted to responsible for handling administrative work. In computer skills, I am familiar with Microsoft Word, Excel, internet, Outlook and Chinese character input method.
Enclosed please find my resume of my detailed personal information and job records for your consideration. If you would like to know more about my ability, please call my mobile number 12345678 for an interview at your earliest convenience.
I apologize for my job duty location cannot connected mobile service. If I have a chance to have an interview, please leave your message in the voice mail or send an e-mail to my email address and I will reply to you as soon as possible.
Thank you for your kindly attention.
Yours sincerely,
Enclosed please find my resume of my detailed personal information and job records for your consideration. If you would like to know more about my ability, please call my mobile number 12345678 for an interview at your earliest convenience.
I apologize for my job duty location cannot connected mobile service. If I have a chance to have an interview, please leave your message in the voice mail or send an e-mail to my email address and I will reply to you as soon as possible.
Thank you for your kindly attention.
Yours sincerely,
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