幫我改英文作文？謝謝

Two days ago, when I went to school, my friend, Jason told me today has dictation.
I was scared because I haven't studied, so I studied very quickly before class.
I feel scared as the English teacher said that the dictation was starting.[這句意義不大，惟有這樣修改]
Two days later, the teacher told us to collect the dictation result. When I went home
and told a lie to mother, as a result she was angry because I didn't know there was a dictation. [她憤怒應該是由於你說謊而不是她不知道要默書，知道要默書是你的責任不是你媽]At the end, I told the truth to mother and said sorry. [用正面寫法說你講出真相並道歉，這樣結束會好一點] 註:“I”永遠都是大寫的。Correct = 正確Collect = 收取/收集

Two days ago, when I went to school, my friend Jason told me that dictation was on that day. I was scared because I hadn't prepared for it. I was forced to study the text very quickly at the last minute before the class began. Panic seized me as the English teacher started to read out the text for dictation. Two days later, the teacher told us to get back the marked copy of our dictation. After going home, I told a lie to my mother for fear that she was angry. She didn’t know that I had a dictation on that day.

下列加落去: 純粹地是個人意思.

At the end, I couldn’t help blurting out the truth. Saying sorry seemed to be the hardest thing to do, but I finally plucked up my courage to say it to my mom.


注釋:
Panic (恐慌) seized me = I got into panic, 不想使用太多 “I “ 字starting a sentence.
couldn’t help = 忍不住
blurt out = 沖口說出
pluck up courage = 鼓起勇氣

評論:
小心全篇要用 past tense, (neither present nor future) . Check all the verbs.
不能用 today 在 reported speech. 除非 direct speech.
作者沒有說自己和 Jason 一起返學.

不知道幾年班級? 否則可以就就.

Two days ago. I went to school with my friend Jason.
He said to me: "We are going to have dictation today."
I was begun to panic because I didn’t studied any at all.
So I try my best to do the fast studied.
When during at the English class the English teacher said: “The dictation is start now”
I feel scared and worry.
Two days after, my English teacher told us to receive dictation at the end of the class.
I lie to my mother for I didn’t had any dictation today because I worry her will angry because I should know and study for the dictation. At the end, I feel panic and unhappy to myself. I shouldn’t lie to mother.

I went to school two days ago with my friend, Jason. He told me that day was the dictation day. I was scared as I was not prepared for it, so I tried to catch up in a very fast fashion. At the moment that the teacher started to dictate, the sense of fear overwhelmed me. The teacher told me two days later that she will correct the dictation. When I went home, I told a lie to my mother and she was angry about this incident. I decided from now on that I would not tell a lie to my mother.