please help me to check errors

Our school newspaper needs some help. To start with, it doesn’t really have any news! The last issue had an article about the soccer team that came out two months after the end of the season. There was something about Ms. Murphy going on pregnancy leave, but by the time it came out, Ms. Murphy was back teaching!

Our school newspaper (definitely) needs some help. To begin with, it doesn’t really have any (up-to-date) news! The last issue had an article about the football (or soccer) team that was put together two months after the end of season. There was some news about Ms Murphy on maternity leave. By the time the news was reported, Ms Murphy was back to teaching!

Comment:
definitely 和 up-to-date 是加上去

Maternity leave = 產假,
香港跟隨英國, 不是用 pregnancy leave. 加拿大, 澳洲, 新西蘭, 新加坡如是.
I assume that the school is in Hong Kong. 香港何時改了用 pregnancy leave?

football (British) = soccer (North America)

Our school newspaper needs some improvement. To start with, it doesn’t really have any news! The last issue had an article about the soccer team that came out two months after the end of the game season. There was something about Ms Murphy going on pregnancy leave, but by the time it came out Ms Murphy had been back teaching already!Note: help = 求救、幫助 – 應用的對象是人(生物) – 不會應用在一份報紙(死物)上的。學多一點詞語的處境意思，不單單是直覺意思。例如這句其實你所謂的help是要改善或改進或修改的情況，所以我會用improvement.當然你還可以想想這詞是否合適表達你的意思，例如強烈一點(或幽默一點)可能用face-lifting.

你好!我叫文杰,我現在英轉中......

我們學校的報紙需要一些幫助。首先，它並沒有真正有任何新聞！最後一個問題，有一篇文章說出來兩個月後，賽季結束的足球隊。有約女士墨菲產假的東西，但它出來的時候，墨菲女士竟然回來教書！

但是,你問的問題是想問(詳盡)?

謝!