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Harry potter and his friends are looking for can destroy voldemort's soul device, at last, he found that his is a soul device, so he gave up his life, but because the resurrection stone and live down, finally, harry potter in his friends help, over voldemort.
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2013-02-25 7:31 pm
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2013-02-27 12:50 am
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Harry potter and his friends are seeking the best idea to destroy voldemort's soul device, at last, they found that his is a soul device,
so he gave up his life, to save his friends.
However, the resurrection stone and live down,
finally, harry potter with his friends' help to defenced dark wizard Lord Voldemort.
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