English Grammer

These are the days we had been through together

right from the start you were a thief you stole my heart
everything means nothing if i ain't got you
trying to forget someone you love is like trying to remember someone you never met
if you know how to cherish what you've got, you will find you are gaining more and more, if you keep pursuing you'll find you are losing faster and faster.
what about the promises that you made
it's been written in the scars on our hearts

留意讀些英文詩或愛情小說吧

The days we had been through.

這才是接近真英文句子
你寫的是每個中文字轉為英文字的失誤，要嘗試戒掉這種寫法習慣，多看原裝英文文章或故事的寫法，記住那些句式。

世上愛情句子何其多，只能自己搜尋吸納，再化為自己心裏的話才能打動對方。

These day we have gone through....
These day we had gone through ....
These day we went through ...