我的英語史2

1 .當你們看到我寫英文的文法錯誤時 , 請幫忙更正 , 謝謝!

Please correct my grammar mistakes if you see any.

你原句有點問題，你不會重覆聽電影，所以把你的句子改成：
2. 我最近開始認真學習英語 , 我會重複聽英語錄音帶及看電影 .

I started to learn English seriously lately. I repeatedly listen to English tape recording and watch English movies.

3. 我現在想睡覺 , 但同時間很肚餓 , 我應該選擇哪一個先 ?

I am now both hungry and sleepy. What shall I do first ?

.當你們看到我寫英文的文法錯誤時 , 請幫忙更正 , 謝謝!I would appreciate if you can correct my English writing shouldyou detect any grammar mistakes.
2. 我最近開始 , 經常學英語 , 還重複聽及看電影 .Lately I have been learning English with unrelenting efforts, andalways watch and listen to the movies repetitively.
3. 我現在想睡覺 , 但同時間很肚餓 , 我應該選擇哪一個先 ?I want to sleep now, but feel ravenous simultaneously. Which one of these should I do first?

1 .當你們看到我寫英文的文法錯誤時 , 請幫忙更正 , 謝謝!

When you see I write English grammar mistakes, please correct me, thank you!2. 我最近開始 , 經常學英語 , 還重複聽及看電影 .
recently started, often learn English, repeated listening and watching movies.3. 我現在想睡覺 , 但同時間很肚餓 , 我應該選擇哪一個先 ?
I want to go to sleep now, but at the same time very hungry, I should choose which one first?

I want to sleep , but I am hungry too , I dont know how to do?