可否幫我改下個resume? plz

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Resume for Qq,briefly:-
Head-Hunter,
Account Clerk.
For the post of account clerk in SCMP.
Enclosed CV(curriculum vitae) currently an acc.clerk,also deal with potential customers.
Can gain experience,training,skills&experience
I would bring my proven ability to deal successfully with customers and CLIENTS.
Available
Looking forward to hearing from you

Sincerely
Qq
Enclosure CV(curriculum vitae) Or Resume'
email to be kept secret from.....

Information Technology

VERBS
Abort, Analyze
backup
Code, Configure, Communicate, Compile, Copy
Decode, Debug, Deploy, Diagnose, Decrypt, Delete, Design, Develop, Disable, Download
Enable, Encrypt, Erase, Execute, Exit
Fix, Formulate, Function
Implement, Initialize, Input, Install, Integrate
Merge
Output
Perform, Process, Program
Repair, Replace, Retrieve, Run
Save, Service, Set up, Shut down, Solve
Test, Troubleshoot
Upload
Validate, Verify

NOUNS
Access, Algorithms, Analysis, Authentication, Automation
Back-up, Break-down, Bug
Certification, Client, Code, Compliance, Configuration, Connection, Crash
Data, Database, Default, Device, Diagnosis
Error
Format, Functionality
Installation, Interface
Latency
Maintenance, Method
Network
Paradigm, Parameter, Performance, Protocol
Resource, Risk
Security, Set-up, Service, Site, Solution, Specification, System
Task, Token, Tool
User

Comment:
You use too many "I" in the covering letter.