故事:(快樂王子第3部分)
Part Three-The Broken Heart
The Little Swallow did not go to Egypt.He stayed with the Happy Prince and the Little Swallow flew all over the city and told the Happy Prince what he saw.He saw rich people in beatiful houses and poor people in dark streets.He saw cold and hungry children.
"I am covered with gold,"said the Happy Prince."You must take it off and then we can give the gold to the poor people."
The Little Swallow took off the gold leaf by leaf and give it to the poor people.The poor people sold the gold and were not cold or hungry anymore.They were happy and the children were laughin.
Soon the Happy Prince looked dull and grey.The weather hadnow turned very cold.It was too cold for the Little Swallow.He did not want to leave the Happy Prince because he loved him very much.
"Goodbye dear Prince,"said the Little Swallow."I am dying."
He kissed the Happy Prince and died near his feet.At that moment the Happy Prince's metal heart broke.
"Bring me the two most precious things in the city,"said God to his angel.The angel brought the broken heart and the dead bird.
"Very well,"said God."In my garden of Paradise this little bird can sing and the Happy Prince can live forever."
(注:必須新增多一個角色)
(Think about (i) what the new character did, (ii) how they solved the problems,and (iii) what was the ending of the story)
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2013-01-25 4:23 am
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2013-01-25 4:13 pm
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----The story re-written to think about (1)what the new character did,(2)how they /he solved the problems,and (3)what was the ending of the story.
The extension of part3 on the broken heart,+Migratory bird.The character added was God in Paradise=Heaven God.
This character saw the workers and Prince statue in furnace in Eden's Garden was not delighted. God said,"Better late than Never!"
He at once mended the broken heart into a Prince's happy heart.as if by divine power.He made the dark purple color statue into shining gold color again.
-----When He saw the dead bird (Swallow) in hands of two angels,he thought he should saved the bird. He touched the dead purple color of Swallow's feathers and breath a breath of life into its beak.
-----So He had saved them from Garden of Eden to Earth near Happy Prinvce's Column.
-----And the migratory bird circled round and round the Happy Prince's statue Column everyday .Strangely ,the red Ruby,the purple Sapphire and Golden gilded coating had benn growing everyday on Prince's body and on his Sword and on his Column.Now he could give the poor children and people around precious stones and gold coating generously.
-----The angels brought vows of thanks to God for the bird and the prince's heart.God said the swallow and Prince need not live in Eden's Garden but paradise on Earth!(230 words)
2013-01-26 8:31 pm
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