I want to use this bit in a story I am writing. Can anyone please help me?
So, it goes like this. A girl who is 15 has parents often away for their work, so she is often alone at home. Her family is the average type. Not rich, not poor. One day, both her parents died in a car accident. There are currently no other living relatives that she can live with, and the will they left says that everything goes to her. What would the authorities do? From the previous answers I will write that a social service worker will come and get her to be put in a foster home, with another average-type family who treats her good. The foster family has another kid, a younger boy. They also have horses (can someone suggest me a state where they can). Overall, the family go great together.
She didn't actually get adopted by a very rich man like I said in the previous question. In a couple of years, she's gonna get on one of the horses and the horse is goong to bring her to this man.
I'll clarify a bit about this "man". He's actually a demon, not human, and literally gets things his own way by any means. In a couple of years this girl's going to be riding a horse (which is actually this "man's", which he had sold to another person some time ago, and this girl's foster family bought it by fate), and the horse runs away and brings her to this "man's" home. She can't return (she comes from US) because she had been magically teleported to England when the horse crosses a magic barrier. Then later she'll discover that it was "him" that plotted all these things, because he's from an "organisation" and "he" needs to get her from orders by "his" superior.
Sorry if this seems a lot, but I don't have much knowledge on this. I'm not American, and the first setting of this story is in the US :)
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The magic universe is meant to be hidden from most humans, only few people know and have magic powers. A bit like Harry Potter.
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It sems that you don't understand the plot a lot. I'll go ahead and write the story first, then I'll come back and show you. Then you can tell me whether it's good enough or not :)