有誰英文很好可以幫我翻譯嗎?

可愛的小怪物您好, @ - @ 也讓Panda try try ㄅ! 發現有些中文打錯, 順便幫你改改ㄅ; 如下: 你可以教我怎麼跳這個舞蹈嗎?1. Can you teach me how to do this dance? *Do this dance = 跳這個舞 2. 可以做一個舞蹈教學的影片嗎?Is it possible to make a dance tutoring video? *Dance tutoring video = 舞蹈教學影片 3. 我最近覺得壓力好大，做甚麼事都不順利。Recently, I have been under a lot of pressure because nothing seems to go smoothly. *Under a lot of pressure = 壓力好大 4. 你會不會有時候聽不懂我再說什麼? (雞同鴨講)Do you sometimes not understand what I am saying? (Comparing apples to oranges) 5. 已經過了這麼多天了，我希望你可以回覆我訊息。It has been days since sending you my message; please reply at your soonest convenience. 6. 你知道她是開哪種牌子的車嗎?Do you know the make of the car she drives? *Make = 牌子 7. 我想抽菸，我一直在忍耐不去碰它，但是我想我總有一天會忍不住的。I really feel like smoking; I have been holding it for some time, but I have a feeling it won’t last forever. 8. A：好久沒見了，你為什麼這幾天都沒上線？A: It had been sometime since you last went online; where have you been?
Ｂ：我這幾天要參加學校的畢業旅行，所以沒時間使用電腦，但是我還是很喜歡 你們標記我的相片和文章。
B: I have been busy preparing for my school’s graduation trip, so I haven’t had time to use the computer, but I liked how you and others tagged my pictures and writings. *tagged = 標記 Hope it helps!

1. 你可以交我怎麼跳這個舞蹈嗎?
Could you teach me how to dance like this?
2. 可以做一個舞蹈教學的影片嗎?
Could you make a dance teaching veido?
3. 我最近覺得腰力好大，做甚麼事都不順利。
I feel great pressure in recently and everything seems not going well.
4. 你會不會有時候聽不懂我再說什麼? (雞同鴨講)
Are you fell you cant not understand what i am talking about sometimes?
5. 已經過了這麼多天了，我希望你可以回覆我訊息。
I wish you could reply me as soon as possible due to it has been so many days.
6. 你知道她是開哪種牌子的車嗎?
Do you know which brand of vehicle she drives?
7. 我想抽菸，我一職再忍耐不去碰它，但是我想我總有一天會忍不住的。
I keep control myself do not smoke but I think I will unable to bear it somedays asI really want to smoke.
8. A：好久沒天了，你為什麼這幾天都沒上線？
　Ｂ：我這幾天我要參加學校的畢業旅行，所以沒時間使用電腦，但是我還是很喜歡 你們標記我的相片和文章。
A: Why you didnt go to on-line in these days?
B: As i went to graduation trip so i didnt have time to use computer. But i really like your photo and article which tagged of me.

-----In translation after re-arranging the conversation.-------
(1)Can you please teach me how I can do this dance?
(2)Can you make a dance-teaching video?
(3)I recently have strong stress by not doing things well.
(4)Do you sometimes couldn't understand what I say?
---Do you think we've not the same language?
(5)It has been after so many days;I hope you can reply to my messages.
(6)Do you know what brand of a car she drives?
(7)I want to smoke, yet tolerate great patient enough not to touch it;Can't help some day.
(8)--(A) Long time we haven't met. Why are you not on line these days?
----- (B) I joined the graduation tour these days;so don't have time to use the computer;but really like your tag-labelling my photos and articles.

1. can you please how can I skip this dance?2. you can make teaching a dance movie?3. I feel better lumbar, doing things well.4. you sometimes can't understand what I say? (Speak)5. after so many days, I hope you can reply to my messages.6. do you know what kind of cars do you she is?7. I want to smoke, I post more patience not to touch it, but I think I can not help but one day.8.A: haven't, why do you never online these days?　B: I the past few days I'm going on the school trip, so don't have time to use computers, but I really like you to tag my photos and articles.
1. can you please how can I skip this dance?2. you can make teaching a dance movie?3. I feel better lumbar, doing things well.4. you sometimes can't understand what I say? (Speak)5. after so many days, I hope you can reply to my messages.6. do you know what kind of cars do you she is?7. I want to smoke, I post more patience not to touch it, but I think I can not help but one day.8.A: haven't, why do you never online these days?B: I the past few days I'm going on the school trip, so don't have time to use computers, but I really like you to tag my photos and articles.

1. 你可以教我怎麼跳這個舞蹈嗎?
Could you teach me how to do the dance?

2. 可以做一個舞蹈教學的影片嗎?
Could I make a dance teaching video?

3. 我最近覺得壓力好大，做甚麼事都不順利。
I recently have strong stress, do anything wrong。

4. 你會不會有時候聽不懂我再說什麼? (雞同鴨講)
Could you thing that we have no the same language?

5. 已經過了這麼多天了，我希望你可以回覆我訊息。
After many days, I hope you can reply to my massage。

6. 你知道她是開哪種牌子的車嗎?
Do you know what kind of the car of brand she drives?

7. 我想抽菸，我一直忍耐不去碰它，但是我想我總有一天會忍不住的。
I continue to stop my mind that make me want to smoke, but I think I will not bear it in someday。

8. A：好久沒天了，你為什麼這幾天都沒上線？
　Ｂ：我這幾天我要參加學校的畢業旅行，所以沒時間使用電腦，但是我還是很喜歡 你們標記我的相片和文章。
A. It's long time age that we meet each other, why aren't you online?
B. I participate the graduation tour in these days, so I don't have time to use the computer. But I still like you tag my photos and articles.