英文作文 - 請幫我看看有什麼地方要修改, 謝謝

2012-12-29 9:29 pm
英文作文 - 請幫我看看有什麼地方要修改, 謝謝My brother--Peter is four years old now. When he was two, he was very lovely and always laughs, he also made my family and I full of laugh.But when he was three, my nightmare started. He was getting naughty. It's because he knew how to walked and play tricks on others. He threw my books into the rubbish and the toilet bowl. He also cut my homework by using a scissors. When I was sleeping, he hit me and shouted loudly.Although my mother saw he was doing bad things, she never scolded him, she said ''he still very young, just let him to do'.That's was the reason why I hate him.Now, I know my brother is an 'evil'.

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2013-01-03 7:14 pm
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My younger brother--Peter is four years old now. When he was two,
he was very lovely and always laughing, he also made my family and I burst into laughter.
But when he was three, my nightmare started. He was getting naughty.
It's because he knew how to walked and play tricks on others.
He threw my books into the dust-bin and the toilet bowl.
He also cut my homework by using a pair of scissors.
When I was sleeping, he hit me and shouted loudly.Although my mother saw he was doing something badly , she never scolded him,
she said ''he is still very young, just let him to do'.
That's the reason why I hated him.Now, I begin to know my younger brother is a rascal.
參考: Partly according to ”The Advanced Learner's Dictionary of Current English with Chinese Translation” by Hongkong Oxford Univ ersity Press1975
2012-12-31 9:23 am
Way USA Such An Evil Use No.202
Way USA Such An Evil Use Bi Obama Notice 212
Way USA Open Such Usage Of American G312
參考: Way Anti Nation Inland Use Of America Norte Guidance 202
2012-12-30 11:22 pm
把'evil' change to 'sinister'
2012-12-30 4:53 am
My brother--Peter is four years old now. When he was two, he was very lovely
He always laughed too. He also made my family and I full of laugh.

When he was three, my nightmare started. He was getting naughty. It's
because he knew how to walked and play tricks on others. He threw my books into the rubbish and the toilet bowl. He also cut my homework by using a scissors. When I was sleeping, he hit me and shouted loudly.



Although my mother saw he was doing bad things, she never scolded him, she
said ''he still very young, just let him to do'.That's was the reason why I hate him.



Now, I know my brother is an 'elfish boy.
參考: Yahoo and me
2012-12-30 12:36 am
You better pay more attention on your tenses. Example, how to walk. He also
cuts.

Chinese English - He also made my family and I full of laugh. - change to he
made our family full of joy.

I know my brother is an evil - change to I just regard him as an evil
2012-12-29 9:44 pm
*Peter's my brother and he's four years old now.
*He was very lovely when he was two.
*He was getting naughty and he always play tricks on others.
*That's the reason why I hate him.

*[Now, I know my brother is an 'evil'.] --> So, I think he's evil.


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